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Anonymous
3/21/23, 6:12 PM
so cute when Midnight was blushing about his former life, but it is in the past where now Dusk is a happy super drone
3/21/23, 5:26 PM
I was on edge for the entirety of the series. You are such a gifted writer! I don’t always like your stuff, but when you hit my kinks, you REALLY hit them HARD. Thanks for writing this!
Anonymous
3/21/23, 5:06 PM
Well written, Delicate emotions. Jesse has been waiting William for many years, I really hope they can get an reunion chapter like the episode 3 of 'the last of us'. Curious if he's been detained
3/21/23, 5:00 PM
This is amazing! Definitely obsessed already!
Anonymous
3/21/23, 4:03 PM
I love this story
3/21/23, 11:27 AM
Some good ideas how but needs editing to fix up readability: I kept stopping to try to figure out what word was intended in many places.

Anonymous
3/21/23, 3:55 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) That is good to know. I sadly don't have an editor so I tried editing the best I can. by the time I was done writing the story the due date was near. plus I don't know any editors let alone any editors that would do it for free. plus I am a little paranoid.
3/21/23, 3:22 PM
excited to see what happens in the den!!
3/21/23, 2:36 PM
Loving this!
3/21/23, 2:05 PM
Fun, fun chapter! I could have used some more erotic tension, if you can believe it. Something about narrating the logistics of their walk through campus and coming up with the plan distracted me from the libido of the scene, and it seemed like they were too coherent/sober for people under the influence of narcotics. You know me — I’m all about consistency of vibe in my storytelling. You’ve got me hooked though, and I will absolutely be plowing through the rest of this series in short order!
3/21/23, 11:36 AM
Ahhhhh. Please. Do. Not. Stop.