Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/18/23, 8:31 PM
And then along came Zeus! This story just keeps getting better and better, every branch adding its own twist on what it means to be a slut. I was hoping for breeding to show up and maybe some cum inflation to follow. After all, all that babybatter has to go somewhere! Looking forward to the author reveal too, I want to see if my hunch is correct. I have a guess on how the story might possibly end too but Im keeping that to myself.

3/20/23, 6:21 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, haha! And I'm curious to know how you think the story might end, too — the final chapters are going up today, so let me know if your hunch ended up right... 👀

Anonymous
3/21/23, 10:50 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I was so very wrong! See anon in final chapter
3/20/23, 2:17 AM
This whole "living engine" concept has such tremendous potential I'm surprised it hasn't been done before. Who's to say, for instance, that psychic energy couldn't be used to power other systems outside of propulsion? And that ending -- please tell me I'm not crazy for thinking it looks like a deliberate sequel hook!

3/21/23, 9:15 AM
@[Ar El](/user/show/10034797) I remember a fictional art with story that used this concept. Though rather than a space ship engine, it was the driver of a gundam-like mech being used in the same manner as its energy source. If I recall correctly the gundam had sentience (or artificial intelligence) and kept its 'driver' trapped inside and in a state of perpetual arousal with no release to fuel itself from the energy of his lust. Also keeping him alive in that state.. forever. So not an unfamiliar concept to me, but it does seem rather uncommon. Nice story either way ^^
3/21/23, 8:47 AM
Really hot story and nice twist in the story
3/21/23, 6:12 AM
Loved this. Nice hedonistic edge to it while also keeping the mind control elements. And the writing was top-notch.
3/21/23, 4:41 AM
I'm quite excited to see more of this when you have time! Your work so far as been *exquisite* and lovely and I live it.
Anonymous
3/21/23, 3:20 AM
one of the best stories I've read! Great work 👏
Haruspex
3/21/23, 2:59 AM
If this story doesn't win the gold I'm going to personally dox every member of this site to give them a firm disapproving stare about their lack of taste. Holy shit, I have no idea how you managed to make a multi-chapter gay erotica story have a plot and characters that were actually compelling and genuinely engaging to read about. I mean, I do, because narrative structures and characterizations and blah blah theory formality bullshit, but still--it's noteworthy because it's a rarity. Win or not, I really can't wait til the end of this contest, man. I'm gonna be keeping my eyes peeled for your future work. Cheers!
2/19/23, 1:07 PM
Oh, man, this is definitely my official favorite story on this site right now. Another great chapter!! You’re an extremely good writer and a stellar world builder. Honestly, I want to LIVE inside Sextreme lol. I love how you bring here the perfect balance between hung jocks like Ted and fat assed twinks like Cam. And the exhibitionism in this chapter was also *chef’s kiss* with the many references to skimpy uniforms and gym outfits: the cafe uniform is sooo freaking hot! I personally think a good himbo in a jockstrap is wearing all he needs to wear, so well done for that! I had the impression that Eddy maybe could be one of the Opportunists who are manipulative bottoms, am I right about that? Can’t wait to see the hung jocks tricked into fucking some tight, Opportunistic ass. I’m already anxious for the next chapter!!

Ash
3/21/23, 2:43 AM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much. You're also right with your impression of Eddy. His story will be out soon, just not sure how yet.
3/12/23, 4:21 PM
I need more Sextreme 😭😭😭

Ash
3/21/23, 2:40 AM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Next chapter in progress, along with another story idea I suddenly wanted to try.
3/21/23, 2:16 AM
What an absolute slam dunk. Hot, heartwarming, well-paced, believable reactions from the protagonists, and fun pulpy conflict. Can't wait for the next chapter, no matter when it comes. Thanks for sharing your work!