Recent Comments

Haruspex
3/21/23, 2:59 AM
If this story doesn't win the gold I'm going to personally dox every member of this site to give them a firm disapproving stare about their lack of taste. Holy shit, I have no idea how you managed to make a multi-chapter gay erotica story have a plot and characters that were actually compelling and genuinely engaging to read about. I mean, I do, because narrative structures and characterizations and blah blah theory formality bullshit, but still--it's noteworthy because it's a rarity. Win or not, I really can't wait til the end of this contest, man. I'm gonna be keeping my eyes peeled for your future work. Cheers!
2/19/23, 1:07 PM
Oh, man, this is definitely my official favorite story on this site right now. Another great chapter!! You’re an extremely good writer and a stellar world builder. Honestly, I want to LIVE inside Sextreme lol. I love how you bring here the perfect balance between hung jocks like Ted and fat assed twinks like Cam. And the exhibitionism in this chapter was also *chef’s kiss* with the many references to skimpy uniforms and gym outfits: the cafe uniform is sooo freaking hot! I personally think a good himbo in a jockstrap is wearing all he needs to wear, so well done for that! I had the impression that Eddy maybe could be one of the Opportunists who are manipulative bottoms, am I right about that? Can’t wait to see the hung jocks tricked into fucking some tight, Opportunistic ass. I’m already anxious for the next chapter!!

Ash
3/21/23, 2:43 AM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much. You're also right with your impression of Eddy. His story will be out soon, just not sure how yet.
3/12/23, 4:21 PM
I need more Sextreme 😭😭😭

Ash
3/21/23, 2:40 AM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Next chapter in progress, along with another story idea I suddenly wanted to try.
3/21/23, 2:16 AM
What an absolute slam dunk. Hot, heartwarming, well-paced, believable reactions from the protagonists, and fun pulpy conflict. Can't wait for the next chapter, no matter when it comes. Thanks for sharing your work!
DD
3/21/23, 1:44 AM
I mean that question could have been answered if one of the other guys Chris was stringing along came out of the woodwork. But at the end of the day I dont think the answer matters because by the epilogue the two guys had settled down.
3/21/23, 1:22 AM
I think I'm in love.
May 12, 2018
3/21/23, 12:55 AM
Like omg, I'm falling in love with your stories. Hahaha. Rubbing my nipples all the way thru. Felt like I was in the story. Really amazed. Thank-you
3/21/23, 12:51 AM
don't apologize for the wait for the next chapter! this is a very funny cliffhanger to hold at, I'm super excited to see where this goes!
3/21/23, 12:07 AM
Not enough hours in the day. (Blame Daylight Savings). Still a most fantastic story for so many reasons. Just love all the characters and the premise and everything. And you’re right, there are a lot of great stories in this challenge. I wish they all could win. Sigh.
3/21/23, 12:01 AM
I am sad to read about the delay in future chapters due to the rules of the contest. However, if it means we will get a more full and complete world, to match what you’ve already given to us, I’m more than happy to make that sacrifice.