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3/19/23, 2:51 AM
Master and his drones are planning such a soft and kind approach with Jamie, compared to Atlas who literally wanted to pulp him into soup :skull: Do you guys think Atlas is justified, or not, and why?

3/20/23, 4:29 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Not, mostly. He's Jamie's mentor, and should have something like fatherly feelings for him. Instead his reaction is far worse than indifferent - it's darn near psychopathic. That said, he has a point when he argues that Jamie left free poses a potential danger for the League. However, with that realization, what Atlas should be doing if he were anything like the decent man he's supposed to be is guarding, watching, and caring for Jamie himself. And if Jamie really is a danger to the League, Atlas is probably the one best equipped to deal with that, instead of leaving it to Luxor. Instead, he basically abandons his apprentice. Jamie idolizes him, and I suspect that Atlas won't even talk to Jamie while he's in exile. Contrast that with Master, who has put on a big show of affection, and made it clear how much he wants Jamie as one of his superdrones. To the extent that Jamie still has a real choice, Atlas's rejection could easily be one of the things that pushes him into Master's warm latex embrace. Who knows? Maybe Atlas will find it in himself to at least put on a show of caring about Jamie, but given his response to date I doubt it could be more than a show. And if Jamie were to find out how Atlas really feels, that could be what sends him running to Master. I wonder if Master had a camera or bug running on that discussion among the Tribunal? Probably not, since DT-X doesn't seem to know enough for that to be the case, but still.

3/20/23, 11:14 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) one good thing about fully accepting and embracing Master's latex is the ability to play! Jamie will never be lonely with DS-005 and all of the puppy and toy drones to keep him company. that'd certainly solve his loneliness problem! and, no more Atlas nagging or judging him :3
3/20/23, 10:51 PM
Mmm, losing myself in this story. This is like my 4th or 5th time oozing myself to it. Rubbing my nipples, ever so lightly. Haha
3/20/23, 11:07 AM
I love this story and agree with Martin. I like the build up and cant wait for the next chapter. It’s been so long that I need to reread the previous chapter to remember what the service drones look like. Really excited! I know what you mean by editing, especially with longer works. If you need a proofreader, I wouldn’t mind helping.

3/20/23, 8:59 PM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thanks for the offer! I might take you up on that, but a little bit later :D

3/20/23, 10:38 PM
@[Reisen](/user/show/10027521) :)
Martin
3/20/23, 9:17 PM
That's some really hot... karma Jack brought upon himself! Great story!

peachy
3/20/23, 9:47 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) thank you!
Leatherslave
3/20/23, 6:58 PM
I would love to be one of the slaves. Being gagged and cuffed and dominated by multiple leather masters makes me the bondage slave I need to be.
3/20/23, 7:02 AM
[Both](https://tenor.com/I0sW.gif)

3/20/23, 6:32 PM
@[PEN15LUVR](/user/show/1012360) Ha! Good use of GIF! And personally, I agree. 😉
3/20/23, 12:07 AM
God this is a hard choice. Option 1 would be so hot but I want to see what awaits him on the 7th floor. I guess I'll pick Option 2.

3/20/23, 6:31 PM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) God *is* a hard choice... when that god is Zeus, and he's hard... Sorry, terrible pun. 😅 But don't worry. You're going to get *both* options. The chapter will split in two like all the others on the 'main' path. So you can follow both options and see where they lead!
3/19/23, 1:39 PM
Option 2 is always my choice, because it allows Xavier to continue to the next challenge while splitting off a new slutty branch. It’s a blast to follow these slutty versions as they get to enjoy the notebook changes in various ways. Looking forward to more hijinxs as Xavier gets to the seventh floor.

3/20/23, 6:29 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying all the branches, haha. 😄 I really appreciate your comments! The seventh floor chapters (and the finale) are going to be posted today... along with the slutty branches, haha.
hypnoslut
3/19/23, 12:37 PM
Gonna go with option 1, but I am really enjoying this story and want to see it continue.

3/20/23, 6:26 PM
@[hypnoslut](/user/show/1090971) Zeus is _very_ tempting, isn't he. 😉 No worries though. You're going to get both options, since this chapter will split in two like all the others did. The story will continue on one path... *and* a version of Xavier is going to stay behind on the other path, to get bred by Zeus.
3/18/23, 9:54 PM
The scope of this story is insane. Each chapter and each part of each chapter is super hot, but also has some funny stuff in there. My favorite is probably still the Incubus Addicts meeting. The story is really clever and so ambitious. I could never write all of these different parts in time for the end of the contest. And do it so well.

3/20/23, 6:24 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) This is all _very_ generous of you to say, thank you! I'm so glad the story has been fun to read. 😄 (And I'm definitely burning myself out like crazy trying to get all the branches done in time, oops. Probably should not have committed to such an ambitious idea for a contest entry... I've learned my lesson!)