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hypnoslut
3/19/23, 12:37 PM
Gonna go with option 1, but I am really enjoying this story and want to see it continue.

3/20/23, 6:26 PM
@[hypnoslut](/user/show/1090971) Zeus is _very_ tempting, isn't he. πŸ˜‰ No worries though. You're going to get both options, since this chapter will split in two like all the others did. The story will continue on one path... *and* a version of Xavier is going to stay behind on the other path, to get bred by Zeus.
3/18/23, 9:54 PM
The scope of this story is insane. Each chapter and each part of each chapter is super hot, but also has some funny stuff in there. My favorite is probably still the Incubus Addicts meeting. The story is really clever and so ambitious. I could never write all of these different parts in time for the end of the contest. And do it so well.

3/20/23, 6:24 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) This is all _very_ generous of you to say, thank you! I'm so glad the story has been fun to read. πŸ˜„ (And I'm definitely burning myself out like crazy trying to get all the branches done in time, oops. Probably should not have committed to such an ambitious idea for a contest entry... I've learned my lesson!)
3/19/23, 4:10 AM
Doubly hotter than the Micah branch!

3/20/23, 6:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Hahaha! Well, hard to compete with just *one* big dick when there's two of them involved... I definitely had a lot of fun writing Bruno and Tony. They'd be excited to know they have a fan. πŸ˜‰
3/19/23, 1:42 PM
Really enjoying all the branches of this, I think so far this one is my favourite! Can't wait for more.

3/20/23, 6:13 PM
@[NANOwriter](/user/show/73689) I'm so glad to hear it! πŸ˜„ I had a lot of fun with this branch in particular. Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Jess
3/20/23, 5:42 PM
There should be some kind of award for the use of a secondary plot device. Your use of Eunice, so much a non character and yet central to the story direction was masterful. Well done.
Jess
3/20/23, 5:17 PM
Excellent plot device with Eunice, both in the last chapter and this one. That he knew she was cheating was a surprise.
3/20/23, 5:15 PM
I love the interplay and power exchange between Ariel and Talley. Definitely fun to watch β€” and that’s on top of the blisteringly hot sex and worldbuilding. Love it!
Jess
3/20/23, 5:01 PM
That was an excellent twist. Never saw it coming.
3/20/23, 1:34 AM
Damn, what happened to these poor guys is just horrible. Makes you wonder just how many of them are out there. Why do the Hunters try to get rid of the Tempters in the first place? Chasing them around just leaves a bunch of heartbroken men in their wake. Or maybe the Hunters know something that we don't? Something that justifies their hunt? So many questions...

3/20/23, 3:59 PM
@[Fagtin](/user/show/10003731) Not really a spoiler, but more like a reveal in the worldbuilding: The hunters are convinced that there's nothing worse than being bound to a Tempter, so in their minds being separated and heartbroken is an improvement. (For them, even killing a guy bound to a Tempter is an improvement). As for why, let's just say they have been doing this since the middle ages and haven't changed their ideas even a little bit.
Gay Harem
3/20/23, 3:47 PM
Thank you for participating in the writing contest! I've assigned you rewards :blush: