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3/19/23, 1:42 PM
Really enjoying all the branches of this, I think so far this one is my favourite! Can't wait for more.

3/20/23, 6:13 PM
@[NANOwriter](/user/show/73689) I'm so glad to hear it! 😄 I had a lot of fun with this branch in particular. Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Jess
3/20/23, 5:42 PM
There should be some kind of award for the use of a secondary plot device. Your use of Eunice, so much a non character and yet central to the story direction was masterful. Well done.
Jess
3/20/23, 5:17 PM
Excellent plot device with Eunice, both in the last chapter and this one. That he knew she was cheating was a surprise.
3/20/23, 5:15 PM
I love the interplay and power exchange between Ariel and Talley. Definitely fun to watch — and that’s on top of the blisteringly hot sex and worldbuilding. Love it!
Jess
3/20/23, 5:01 PM
That was an excellent twist. Never saw it coming.
3/20/23, 1:34 AM
Damn, what happened to these poor guys is just horrible. Makes you wonder just how many of them are out there. Why do the Hunters try to get rid of the Tempters in the first place? Chasing them around just leaves a bunch of heartbroken men in their wake. Or maybe the Hunters know something that we don't? Something that justifies their hunt? So many questions...

3/20/23, 3:59 PM
@[Fagtin](/user/show/10003731) Not really a spoiler, but more like a reveal in the worldbuilding: The hunters are convinced that there's nothing worse than being bound to a Tempter, so in their minds being separated and heartbroken is an improvement. (For them, even killing a guy bound to a Tempter is an improvement). As for why, let's just say they have been doing this since the middle ages and haven't changed their ideas even a little bit.
Gay Harem
3/20/23, 3:47 PM
Thank you for participating in the writing contest! I've assigned you rewards :blush:
Gay Harem
3/20/23, 3:44 PM
Hey, hey! A kind reminder to give me your ID for me to assign you rewards.
3/20/23, 2:31 PM
More!!!!
3/20/23, 2:16 PM
Loved this chapter! So much emotions, and some wild connections are being made!