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3/19/23, 3:42 AM
not sure how it would work but would love a sequel to this :smiling_imp:
3/19/23, 12:13 AM
Love this , need more
3/18/23, 11:55 PM
Ver very hot. Growing up I used to have fantasies of this exact scenario. Thank you for letting me relive them through reading your work

3/19/23, 12:07 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) No problem! I’m glad you enjoyed the story James.
3/18/23, 11:01 PM
Looks like Calvin didn't think to rinse out his Cycle Two bottle well enough.
3/18/23, 10:55 PM
🔥🔥🔥🔥🤤
3/18/23, 9:37 PM
Like OMG, my tiny clitty, is pulsing, from my mind wandering. Lust driven even. So like turned on at the thoughts
3/18/23, 8:40 PM
Yummy sexy n oh so sexy hot 🔥. Was like totally rubbing my nipples, licking my lips, moaning and like so totally turned on
Jonathan
3/18/23, 8:17 PM
Couldn't hold my load reading this story! Lovin' it!
3/17/23, 11:43 PM
Overall, it was a good read. I really liked how the kid explored his circumstances and came to like it. And even wanted to expand on it. The one critique I would offer is over the time jump. While I like what became of him, it would have been even better to read about him training and becoming a commissioned citizen. How he experienced it, how it's like taking orders from done. We just got the end result.

Anonymous
3/18/23, 3:17 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I agree. How he ended up would have been hot.

3/18/23, 8:10 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks for the feedback! I decided against going into detail about Tom’s training for several reasons, chief among them being my desire to see the story concluded. Training would have taken an entire chapter. Another major reason is that I’ve already written something similar in Evan’s Journey. Repeating the same felt a little stale. Moreover, I am finalizing my edits to the latest chapter of the Boys of Astoris, which is all about training. I may publish my doodles about Tom’s training (because of course I do have some :D ) a little later.