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3/18/23, 8:40 PM
Yummy sexy n oh so sexy hot 🔥. Was like totally rubbing my nipples, licking my lips, moaning and like so totally turned on
Jonathan
3/18/23, 8:17 PM
Couldn't hold my load reading this story! Lovin' it!
3/17/23, 11:43 PM
Overall, it was a good read. I really liked how the kid explored his circumstances and came to like it. And even wanted to expand on it. The one critique I would offer is over the time jump. While I like what became of him, it would have been even better to read about him training and becoming a commissioned citizen. How he experienced it, how it's like taking orders from done. We just got the end result.

Anonymous
3/18/23, 3:17 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I agree. How he ended up would have been hot.

3/18/23, 8:10 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks for the feedback! I decided against going into detail about Tom’s training for several reasons, chief among them being my desire to see the story concluded. Training would have taken an entire chapter. Another major reason is that I’ve already written something similar in Evan’s Journey. Repeating the same felt a little stale. Moreover, I am finalizing my edits to the latest chapter of the Boys of Astoris, which is all about training. I may publish my doodles about Tom’s training (because of course I do have some :D ) a little later.
3/18/23, 7:26 PM
This has been a long standing favorite of mine.
3/18/23, 7:24 PM
This was a great read. I really enjoyed this story.
Somnus
3/18/23, 7:21 PM
A fantastic instalment. It’s unusual to see a guy escape a scenario like that. I’m very intrigued to find out how he gets roped back in.
3/18/23, 5:07 PM
This was extremely hot, and I can't help but feel it ended before it could get hotter. I could easily see a continuation of this story, even if it's never made!
3/18/23, 2:04 PM
i love the content about smells of Logan. I keep inhaling deeply each time you write about it. I love it.
BiII1t
3/18/23, 12:11 PM
Sensational! Absolutely inspiring! So immersive. I wish I understood the concept of werecocks better though. The turned and born part seemed understandable enough. However, the positions were kind of hard from me to grasp. That's more of my problem though! Great work!
Somnus
3/18/23, 10:09 AM
There are lots of nice touches here that really make the environment pop. It's always good to get a new Hypnothrill story!