Recent Comments

3/17/23, 5:57 AM
That’s the hottest thing I’ve read in a while. I normally don’t like long ones, but you kept me interested and hard the whole time. Just kept getting better.

3/17/23, 8:11 AM
@[Venom1313](/user/show/10015295) Thank you so much!
3/17/23, 5:25 AM
That was fun. Give the next guy a Punk Makeover for the bar.
Anonymous
3/11/23, 11:12 AM
When will the next chapter come out? This story is amazing

Nutiper
3/17/23, 4:40 AM
@Anonymous I'm hoping for sometime mid-April. My schedule should be freer by then. I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I'm hoping to have it all wrapped up in the next month or so...
3/17/23, 3:19 AM
I think this story has a lot of potential. It looks like you could take some more time with it to really develop the story, and build up to the demon in the room.
4/12/22, 8:47 PM
Damn! Sammy is one hot fucker. I would so be his bitch.

4/12/22, 10:30 PM
@John Rogers It's Sammy's world, we're all just living in it.

4/16/22, 10:12 PM
i also want to be @Jack Parker bitch

3/17/23, 1:58 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) me too!
Elm
3/17/23, 1:22 AM
I love how creative you are with this story, I find the gimmick intriguing!
Jul 31, 2009
3/17/23, 12:25 AM
This is so fucking hot, it almost doesn't need the sex scenes. I really loved the mind control and revenge reasons behind it, and it's just told so well!
3/16/23, 11:38 PM
I'd say it's more likely a function of Valour's leadership skills than any real niceness. Probably comes from his military experience.
Jan 13, 2007
3/16/23, 9:35 PM
Please write more!
3/16/23, 9:12 PM
More Please