Recent Comments

3/16/23, 2:34 PM
Really sexy! Loved it! So much variety based on the same triggers!!! :heart_eyes: I must admit, for some reason, when readying the synopsis, I thought of a squishmallow or whatever those plushies are called. So I got whisplash when I realized it was a "silent library" fantasy with no TF. :satisfied:

3/16/23, 7:03 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you so much, Blobby! Sorry it didn't match your squishy fantasies though haha
H
3/16/23, 6:16 PM
Would be gutting if you didn’t wrap this up with one final chapter, one of the best series I’ve read for quite a long time!!
3/16/23, 2:46 PM
Are we allowed to guess authors? Because I have some strong suspicions I know the author behind this tantalizing little tale.

3/16/23, 6:10 PM
@[Demivierge](/user/show/908122) Best not to state your guess publicly, I suppose, since it’s not in the spirit of the contest… More fun if it’s anonymous! But I’m charmed that people are speculating, haha. I did take inspiration from a few different authors for different branches, and some of the guesses so far have been flattering. I’m glad you’re finding it to be a tantalizing read!
Jim
3/16/23, 10:10 AM
Great story - thank you - option 1 please

3/16/23, 5:52 PM
@[Jim](/user/show/10026335) Thank you! And no worries, I finished writing both options last night. 😉 You'll get to read both! (I just need to write the continuations of the other three branches too — aka, Micah, the security guards, and the incubus — and then I'll post all five new chapters at once.)
3/16/23, 8:48 AM
I don't think I've read an Eldritch being manipulating reality so that humans can perceive them quite like this. Brilliant!

3/16/23, 5:50 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) Thank you! I had a lot of fun coming up with him... I'm glad you're enjoying it! 😁
Anonymous
3/15/23, 9:29 PM
Oh, to have a slut brand of myself, obvious to the world. This is such a great story and the still connected, ever expanding branches is a great narrative device. Great story! Brilliant! More!

3/16/23, 5:42 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And who knows, maybe give Micah a visit... He might have a slut brand in store for you too. 😉
3/15/23, 8:15 PM
This is awesome to the n factorial (n!). Every time Xavier escapes with the notebook his slutty version splits off. And we all get to have our cake and eat it too. Genius!

3/16/23, 5:40 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Gosh, thank you for all your very kind comments, I really appreciate them! 😁 And you were one of the first to spot how the story works, too — I was really glad to see people catching onto it in the comments!
3/16/23, 5:57 AM
HOLY FUUUUCK! This was THEEE chapter. 100/10.

3/16/23, 5:30 PM
@[Thexshxboi](/user/show/910223) Hahaha I'm really glad you liked it! 😁 I had fun writing this one.
John
3/16/23, 9:39 AM
I think the incubus branch gives away who you are, personally! But I love your stories. You and the other author mentioned are epic tier Amazing story and I love the CYOC format

3/16/23, 5:29 PM
@John Well there was definitely an author I had in mind as inspiration when writing the incubus 'branch' too, haha... 😉 But I'm very flattered! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and the format!
3/16/23, 4:18 PM
Very interesting. Love the gaps in time and what (probably) happens during them.