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3/14/23, 9:39 PM
Great story! What an interesting set up. The slow reveal on who is the one doing is super fun. The various ways each plays is great. The final convo and then the end was hot. Really good story. Fun and sexy as well.

3/14/23, 9:40 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you so much, Heru! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Sebastián Apollo
3/14/23, 8:57 PM
I have to concur with the other two commenters, brilliant work! All your stories bring such a big, pervy smile to my face and this one was no exception! I think Essex laid it out best, what great twist on such an established trope of the big hunky jock dominating the nerd. I'm especially turned on by the learned helplessness that Leo uncovers when he starts being reminded of all the sex acts he performed for Ken and his buddies while in his hypnotized state, but decides it just feels better to give in and to go with it. Great work, good job!

3/14/23, 9:27 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much for your kind words, Sebastián! I tried to make it so it wasn't the typical mean jock plus submissive nerd, overall make it so the jocks are basically using Leo, but he also enjoys being used when they all hang out together!
3/14/23, 8:13 PM
Another masterful story! I do love a story with a nasty nerd getting their comeuppance :smile:

3/14/23, 8:24 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much!
3/14/23, 8:20 PM
Incredibly hot, sexy play on the nerd vs jock trope with a twist. Each scene hotter than the last, and the slow reveal was worth the wait for some explosive action. Kudos Twan!

3/14/23, 8:24 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much, Essexy! It means a lot.
Connor
1/21/23, 5:50 PM
thx for the rainy day jerk! wish i could spend some time w/ brock!!! great story, man...

3/14/23, 8:06 PM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) Thank you!
3/14/23, 8:04 PM
Damn that’s what I want to happen to me! Can’t wait to read series.
Nox
3/14/23, 4:20 PM
I came for porn, but stayed for wholesomeness. Just binged the entire story. Great work!

3/14/23, 7:45 PM
@[Nox](/user/show/57232) So glad you liked it! It means a lot.
3/14/23, 4:09 PM
You have my attention
Jul 3, 2022
NorCalPenis
3/14/23, 8:46 AM
This was so wonderful. I hope you play more with gooning and poppers in future stories.
3/12/23, 6:34 AM
I wanna see the drones cum sometime after struggling and twitching ferociously in their bulges... especially Dylan

Anonymous
3/12/23, 10:07 PM
@[Alsace-Lorraine](/user/show/908363) Well, since we're throwing random speculation out there, something that's been on my mind ever since the revelation that Master Myriad is "transmuter" class, as he calls himself, is how much latex he can actually produce without straining himself too much. Fast forward to now, and we've just gotten hard confirmation that overexertion is dangerous for all supers(perhaps even particularly so for Myriad). We also know he plans to drone most of the city, and hints that the latex is used for purposes beyond just the suits -- in other words, he probably needs a whole lotta the stuff. Now, Master is Master, I have no doubt if he puts his mind to it he can find a way to squeeze "stirring industrial vats of black ooze" in between "plotting world domination" and "getting groped by Onyx" if he really wants to. But what's the point of being an evil mastermind with an army of drones at your disposal if you can't delegate every now and then? And by "delegate" I mean "force a warehouse full of drones into a constant state of orgasm and then harvest their rubber cum to fuel your nefarious plots." No doubt it'd be inferior to what Master makes himself, but it'd only be used on low-level drones, basic structural reinforcement, that kind of thing. And on top of the more industrial setup, you could have creative one-offs using the same principle -- I'm thinking latex fountain fueled by living "statues," for instance. It'd be a nice conversation piece when bringing in captured heroes to discuss their future employment options. Between vat-stirring and drone-milking, I know which method I'd choose if I had kinky latex powers. Just saying. Still not convinced? Then let me put it this way: One of the defining features of the rubber drone is the famous nulge, right? Enforced chastity until Master says so. Going off the theme of "balance," it only stands to reason that there would be some drones in the opposite position -- forced orgasms until Master grants them a reprieve. It's just good storytelling. :wink:

3/12/23, 11:19 PM
@Anonymous Master's antics are interesting o_O, that could make some sense, hopefully the League will explain what the hell were the Generator Class, and how they are able to make/warp so much substances even in the first place (and what are the classes even?)

3/13/23, 3:43 AM
@Anonymous I like it, and I had the same thought about Master's personal latex production capacity. I do get the sense that producing latex, and even symbiotes is a lot less strain than converting superdrones, which imposes the biggest drain on his strength. One problem with your request is that we don't have any inkling that the drones actually produce latex cum. In fact, almost the opposite. It would be a definite disadvantage for the toy drones (most owners would find it problematic). Of course, Master does say he can play with his Drones' settings. Maybe that is one of the settings he can adjust. Also, I note that his latex seems to have a great capacity to expand and grow.

Anonymous
3/13/23, 7:25 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Yeah, I did neglect to mention it(what with it already being a large post), but my assumption was that they would be specifically modified drones("Producer Drones" for that DP action?). I actually don't think it's all that unreasonable to believe that fully converted drones cum liquid latex(more on that later), but even so it would probably be helpful to have ones that were engineered for maximum efficiency and output. Regarding latex production in general, I feel there is a push and a pull there; on the one hand, Master obviously needs to be able to produce a lot of it for his schemes to pencil out, but on the other, if he can effectively produce an infinite supply of the stuff, it quickly becomes a broken power. Tying latex production directly to the existing number of drones feels like a believable compromise with the added benefit of serving as fodder for more kinky scenarios. Lastly, on the topic of Toy Drones, I actually have a theory about them which I'm almost convinced is accurate(or at least close), so much so that I hesitate to share it here. If you'd like, I could DM you so we could discuss it further. It'd be a good excuse for me to finally register for an account, at any rate!

3/13/23, 6:11 PM
@Anonymous Kinda hard to DM "Anonymous."🙃

3/13/23, 8:33 PM
@Anonymous So, here's what we know about toy drones, so far: 1. They retain more individual traits than any of the other drone types except superdones, and probably, hounds and undercover drones. This includes individual differences in their appearance and personalities; 2. There have been a total of 164 of them, including their head, DT-X; 3. They are "assigned" to owners other than Master - assignment in this context could mean a sale, lease, gifting, or placement in temporary service to someone Master wants to influence or favor, or even spy on; 4. Their conversions may or may not be entirely voluntary, depending on the individual; 5. They can provide their owners with many types of services, including sexual, other personal comfort, and domestic services at a minimum; 6. They have some level of accelerated learning capability, so as to be able to improve the range of services they provide. We don't know that they're all male, and given that there would probably be as much or more demand for female toy drones, we can't assume there aren't any. Since Master and his head drones consider personality (and presumably other traits) in deciding the type of drone a person becomes, it is likely that most, if not all toy drones were submissive to begin with. Many of them may well be volunteers, or at least entirely willing. I suspect that a fair number of the readers of this story would take that opportunity if it were offered, and many others find it appealing as a fantasy.

3/14/23, 6:18 AM
@Anonymous Hey Anonymous! With all of the many people who have taken such a keen interest in the story (and honestly who can blame them, there's such a beautiful balance between plot, intrigue, and sensual moments), honestly if you'd like to contact Neon Demon through discord and join the ig "fan server" then go right ahead! Lots of theories and fun talk :DD