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3/12/23, 4:31 AM
Got interested in the subtitle… Great to see two Cycle One inspired stories in a week!! Thank you!!
3/11/23, 3:36 PM
My second reading. Even better than the first time. Thanks. By the way I hope you are well & your studies are going great.

3/12/23, 3:09 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) yeah it is, finally shook long Covid and school sucks, but that isn't going to change lol
3/12/23, 3:01 AM
Oh, Maverick is even mentioned. This is going to be great.

3/12/23, 3:09 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) I'm building the MCU of porn lol
Assimilator
3/12/23, 1:21 AM
Assimilate to Master’s desires and wishes!

3/12/23, 2:58 AM
@Assimilator Gladly, if I could find him.
3/12/23, 1:44 AM
The king is BACK! :D My heart started jumping as soon as I saw a new Hypnothrill story on here, and this does NOT disappoint. You do an excellent job demonstrating the energy boost that comes from Cycle One; it’s interesting, actually. Your stories either feature a kind of manic muscle energy—victims becoming obsessed with exercise—or a lethargic, brain-draining one—victims having their energy sucked out until they mindlessly obey and stop thinking. I usually prefer the latter, but the hyperactive energy of this one is incredible! Also love the set-up of our hero coming back to a changed world…and as always, more representation is always welcome. Hypnothrill has returned! :D
Anonymous
3/11/23, 11:44 PM
Excellent work!
Anonymous
3/11/23, 11:41 PM
Puting it out there why not do a section that transform the teacher next after all the slave need a role module to follow.
hvt
3/11/23, 9:11 PM
Hot chapter! Great to see Connor's return.

3/11/23, 11:32 PM
@[hvt](/user/show/909753) Thanks man, I thought adding him would be fun.
3/11/23, 7:46 PM
First of props to @copsboy64 for theorizing, I didnt even catch that Maelstrom information that was off, so yeah ty for your attention to detail! I, ok, this is kind of summarizing my previous thoughts on Dusk, as well as adding in information talking with Neon Demon: A lot of the story so far has subtle themes of balance. From how it is freeing to be constrained in latex, to the good actions that Master does (whom admitted to be a supervillain), as well as the balanced magical system. Too much usage of overpowered magic results in very severe consequences. Each "side" is morally ambivalent, and has done either bad actions or has an ultimately evil intention. With that theme in mind, I have a theory that Midnight's Symbiote and Jamie's Symbiote (Dusk/DS-005 and Daybreaker/DS-013) are either developed from each other, or are linked much more closely than the other drones have in common. For one, both of their powers and colours are reversals of each other. The dichotomy of the explosive light and the coiling tendrils of shadow is just so nicely planned out. Additionally, the fact that Dusk continuously chooses to be close to Jamie, to feel Jamie, and to nudge him further along to become a Drone coincides with the tidbit that DS-005 is excited/anticipating that Jamie will soon activate his symbiote even outside of Master's latex embrace. Maybe the idea of "different generations" of drones can come into play? DT-X vs DT-163, a parallel could be DS-005 and DS-013? It could make sense, but only Time can unravel the mysteries inside of this awesome and intricately planned out story. . .

3/11/23, 9:57 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Interesting theory, thst. On the balance part, I can see it. On the symbiote thing, that seems improbable, but given the surprises we've gotten in this story, not impossible. It would have to be Jamie's symbiote somehow born from Dusk's though, because Dusk has had his symbiote somewhere between 1 and 2 years at the opening moments of the story, where Jamie just got his. So until proven otherwise, I'm going with Occam's razor and the simplest explanation here - just plain old mutual attraction. From Dusk's end, I suspect Midnight developed feelings for Jamie, but couldn't act on them because most of the time they were together in the League, Jamie was too young for him to act on those feelings. And by the time Jamie was old enough, Midnight was well into his downward spiral. It's telling that one of Dusk's first interactions with Jamie was basically a low level sexual assault. He didn't have to do that to subdue him, and it might even have been counterproductive to his goal of bringing Jamie in. On Jamie's side, the attraction would have started with his old hero worship of Midnight, which may have become a little more as their friendship developed. But again, to the extent that he may have developed any feelings beyond hero worship, he would have been too young and unsure of himself to act on them. Then there's the fact that in their first encounter, Jamie thinks of Dusk as being "hotter," implying that he thought Midnight was hot to begin with.
Mar 9, 2023
3/11/23, 9:52 PM
Cute story, always nice to see a woman find a good use for her boyfriend