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Super Hot...

Really nice, effective short one.

This Chapter is mostly exposition. As with preceding pieces of exposition in this masterpiece, it raises as many questions as it answers, or more. So: Goliath - he's been a bit player so far, but he is really starting to intrigue me. First, I don't buy that it was a blow from Maelstrom that made him retire, especially since his power allows him to greatly reduce the impact of blows. We also get the Intel that it was Valour who ultimately took down Maelstrom, and between the two, I'd say that Goliath has the stronger powers. So I think that Maelstom blow was just the cover story given to the lesser heroes and the World. I believe Goliath's problem was basically the same as Horizon's and Midnight's, with the addition that he knew more about the extent of the League's corruption, and likely even had taken part in it.. Or maybe, like Midnight, he balked, and left because of irreconcilable differences. And when, precisely did his conversion take place? Given that he's DS-003, it has to be sometime between 2 and 6 years ago. And how willing was he? Minotaur - It was good to get confirmation that Minotaur too is now one of Master's superdrones. It leads me to speculate that the "what he deserved" Dusk refers to is a deliberate betrayal by Midnight/Dusk that led directly to his capture and dronification. This could also go into the level of trust between Master and Dusk. It is also a very fitting response to what Midnight could only have seen as a betrayal of both good and himself personally by his mentor. DT-X and DH-X - the revelation that some, probably all, types of drone have a head drone is a neat insight into the structure and hierarchy of Master's organization. Is there a separate DS-X, or is that Master? Onyx - his role of bringing in new drones is very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing him at work. Given Horizon's ability to teleport latex onto someone, I imagine he could be a lot of help with this. Then there's Onyx being such a brat. He seems to have more leeway in how he treats and interacts with Master than any other drone. But it also appears that this is only because Master enjoys it. Luxor - how will Master's targeting of him proceed, and will it succeed? Given that he can burn away latex on his body, he's going to have to be caught unawares when it goes on, either asleep or knocked out. And what was up with his uncharacteristic huffing of Valour's jock? It almost certainly has something to do with his latex speck. My guess is that it was a test by Master to see if he could exert influence over Luxor through that speck of latex. More to come, but this is enough for now.

This is fantastic! Well done. I hope we get to see more of the effects of the gas. Great job!

Totally agree with Chasm. CTF stories are the hottest. Now I’m wondering how much Merlin will remember from the night before (if any) when he wakes up. Will he just think Rich is at class? At the library? The gym? Or will Rich, now Dick, be like Jackson/Jackoff? Will Merlin “forget” Rich when he tries to think about him? Kinda hate for him to lose his best friend, but then again, isn’t a guy’s dick his best friend anyway? Just an awesome story, regardless.

That's a cool idea for a story. :grinning: I bet there is a lot of potential for a sequel of this. The control over a whole team of hot muscular jocks full of testosterone and big bulging muscles and bulges... There should be much more details and a looot of hot and naughty sex! Oh and by the way: I bet the assisting coach doesn't wear gloves while oiling and creaming the jocks... So he is under control as well - I hope. :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

Nice!

Awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Personally, I hope Jack retains his smooth, young appearance as he becomes a hot leather/rubber stud. I think its incredibly hot to see a cute boyish looking guy who's a cocky leather/rubber Master. Thank you for sharing your great work!

Master is honestly a lot better than the League, perhaps he does deserve to rule the city after all…