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3/10/23, 1:13 PM
Great first chapter!!!
3/10/23, 1:01 PM
This is so good to re-visit. You’re fiction is warped and wonderful.
3/10/23, 11:57 AM
Oh geez. And now, because of all the drinking, he won’t remember he did this. Oh man.
Lampshade15
3/10/23, 11:38 AM
This is off to a really good start!
Anonymous
3/10/23, 9:53 AM
I'm...honestly surprised we got a Master Myriad POV. I mean, on the one hand, he's an absolutely *enthralling* character and I've been dying to get into his head since a couple of chapters ago. On the other hand, I feel like it's almost an unwritten rule of drone fiction that Master is unimpeachable, unattainable, incomprehensible -- more than a mere man; a living god. I think you've done a beautiful job of giving him just a few humanizing qualities without losing that deliciously dark edge that makes everyone tremble with, uh...let's say fear. And speaking of fear, I find it interesting that the League's very fear that Myriad is some kind of totally inhuman monster not only serves as justification for their own misdeeds, but also distracts them from what really makes him dangerous -- namely, his subtler schemes such as his infiltration of city hall. An infiltration helped, no doubt, by Myriad's abilities, but one that could conceivably have been carried out by anyone with enough patience, cunning, and natural charisma. It all dovetails so wonderfully with other themes and questions posed by the story thus far. But, I'm sure some of that is just a happy coincidence, right? Nobody could write such fiendishly clever erotica that makes you contemplate the nature of good and evil while you wank! You'd have to be some kind of diabolical mastermind...
3/10/23, 9:42 AM
I really like the premise. Great Story as usual.
3/10/23, 9:16 AM
Amazing job! Well written and a great story. Even stuff I’m not into I enjoyed reading. good show.
3/10/23, 9:11 AM
I gotta go with 1 here. Of the encounters he's had, demons are by far the best of the best. And there's always the chance if he hangs around too long, other incubi will come across them.
3/10/23, 8:34 AM
Oooo I like where this is going. Can’t wait to see more! Hopefully Ryan’s dad gets a piece of that sweet ass soon.
3/10/23, 8:07 AM
Just incredible. Such an imaginative story! So well written! Perfectly paced! So hot! Great characters! I especially loved Arjay. He’s very different from other characters I’ve read about here. That really turned me on! I’d love to read more about his adventures before and after this story. Every chapter was a winner and got me rock hard. I came four times while reading this story. (I read a chapter or two a night.) And it all adds up to something very well crafted, sexy and fun! You are a very talented writer.