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3/10/23, 9:42 AM
I really like the premise. Great Story as usual.
3/10/23, 9:16 AM
Amazing job! Well written and a great story. Even stuff I’m not into I enjoyed reading. good show.
3/10/23, 9:11 AM
I gotta go with 1 here. Of the encounters he's had, demons are by far the best of the best. And there's always the chance if he hangs around too long, other incubi will come across them.
3/10/23, 8:34 AM
Oooo I like where this is going. Can’t wait to see more! Hopefully Ryan’s dad gets a piece of that sweet ass soon.
3/10/23, 8:07 AM
Just incredible. Such an imaginative story! So well written! Perfectly paced! So hot! Great characters! I especially loved Arjay. He’s very different from other characters I’ve read about here. That really turned me on! I’d love to read more about his adventures before and after this story. Every chapter was a winner and got me rock hard. I came four times while reading this story. (I read a chapter or two a night.) And it all adds up to something very well crafted, sexy and fun! You are a very talented writer.
Sebastián Apollo
3/10/23, 6:55 AM
I have to concur with the other commenters, this was _really_ good! Not only in terms of representation (which was really great to see), but just in the writing and characterization of Brook and Carter and their banter. Brilliant work, great job!
3/10/23, 6:51 AM
Simply an amazing first chapter. Can’t wait for more!
3/10/23, 5:51 AM
I am SO GLAD to see that Jamie's rent situation has been handled. there were literally no other pressing issues other than that, and now it's handled, so I'm sure things will be fine from here on out! jokes aside, this was a great chapter! I think doing asmaler interlude bits here was a great choice for the pacing
3/10/23, 5:46 AM
I hope you are going to continue this story because it’s very hot!!!
3/10/23, 2:47 AM
Another great chapter, Neon Demon. It's not quite as horny as the Prologue or Chapter 3, but it has its moments. The balance of exposition to continued mystery is exquisite. Plots and counterplots! Oh my! I love the way you confirmed the "heroes'" villainy, out of their own mouths. And told us what Cerberus probably was, without quite telling us for sure. That gets me really rooting for Master. You also confirmed my suspicion that the phone chip was a setup for politicians Master wanted to take down. Dylan's conversion scene was superb, and wonderfully ambiguous. If left completely to his own will, would he still have accepted the offer? And I'm loving the hints that DS-005/Dusk is carrying a bit of a torch for his Boom Boy. Now that I've read though it, I'm going to read it again, and really savor it. Because another thing about really good writing is that it rewards your rereading it with details and insights you missed on the first read.

3/10/23, 3:12 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) hey if you get in touch with Neon Demon, we've actually been talking stuff so if you want to set up that discord, well, lets just say that the lore is FAR more fleshed out than what the stories seem someone's been working HARD in worldbuilding

3/10/23, 4:07 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) OK. How do I do that?

3/10/23, 4:10 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) im not sure if im allowed to link stuff directly on GSS, but if you click on his profile, it should pop up his twitter. his twitter bio has a link and has his Discord contacts, highly reccomend talking to him he said that he really liked us 2 theorizing o_O and yeahs!

3/10/23, 5:32 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Cool. I'll give in a shot. I'd love chatting directly with our super creative author.