Recent Comments

3/10/23, 3:18 PM
This is a clever and surprising idea. 3 levels into the story now, and each decision involving the book that Xavier makes causes a split version of him but every change made by the book affects every other version of him. This is so novel and interesting and exciting. I love that it’s a choose your own adventure where I want to read every branch. Especially because they are so hot. I’m especially a fan of big dicks, so this level (3) in particular is really hot to me. Every one of the people that Xavier encountered all have big dicks and reading how he reacts to all of them is super hot. I’m excited for more and very curious how many levels you’ll do. Each one is more work if you keep up the pattern. It’s already an impressive amount of writing.
3/10/23, 2:55 PM
Holy hell, you may have outdone yourself here. The way you described the ink and metal and silicone flowing from one to the other, corrupting not only the body but the mind and even the soul. This is mastery. You should be incredibly proud of yourself here.
3/10/23, 2:27 PM
Great addition, and teasing of so much more to come! 😍
3/10/23, 1:37 PM
Can't wait to read more
3/10/23, 1:13 PM
Great first chapter!!!
3/10/23, 1:01 PM
This is so good to re-visit. You’re fiction is warped and wonderful.
3/10/23, 11:57 AM
Oh geez. And now, because of all the drinking, he won’t remember he did this. Oh man.
Lampshade15
3/10/23, 11:38 AM
This is off to a really good start!
Anonymous
3/10/23, 9:53 AM
I'm...honestly surprised we got a Master Myriad POV. I mean, on the one hand, he's an absolutely *enthralling* character and I've been dying to get into his head since a couple of chapters ago. On the other hand, I feel like it's almost an unwritten rule of drone fiction that Master is unimpeachable, unattainable, incomprehensible -- more than a mere man; a living god. I think you've done a beautiful job of giving him just a few humanizing qualities without losing that deliciously dark edge that makes everyone tremble with, uh...let's say fear. And speaking of fear, I find it interesting that the League's very fear that Myriad is some kind of totally inhuman monster not only serves as justification for their own misdeeds, but also distracts them from what really makes him dangerous -- namely, his subtler schemes such as his infiltration of city hall. An infiltration helped, no doubt, by Myriad's abilities, but one that could conceivably have been carried out by anyone with enough patience, cunning, and natural charisma. It all dovetails so wonderfully with other themes and questions posed by the story thus far. But, I'm sure some of that is just a happy coincidence, right? Nobody could write such fiendishly clever erotica that makes you contemplate the nature of good and evil while you wank! You'd have to be some kind of diabolical mastermind...