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3/10/23, 2:47 AM
Another great chapter, Neon Demon. It's not quite as horny as the Prologue or Chapter 3, but it has its moments. The balance of exposition to continued mystery is exquisite. Plots and counterplots! Oh my! I love the way you confirmed the "heroes'" villainy, out of their own mouths. And told us what Cerberus probably was, without quite telling us for sure. That gets me really rooting for Master. You also confirmed my suspicion that the phone chip was a setup for politicians Master wanted to take down. Dylan's conversion scene was superb, and wonderfully ambiguous. If left completely to his own will, would he still have accepted the offer? And I'm loving the hints that DS-005/Dusk is carrying a bit of a torch for his Boom Boy. Now that I've read though it, I'm going to read it again, and really savor it. Because another thing about really good writing is that it rewards your rereading it with details and insights you missed on the first read.

3/10/23, 3:12 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) hey if you get in touch with Neon Demon, we've actually been talking stuff so if you want to set up that discord, well, lets just say that the lore is FAR more fleshed out than what the stories seem someone's been working HARD in worldbuilding

3/10/23, 4:07 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) OK. How do I do that?

3/10/23, 4:10 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) im not sure if im allowed to link stuff directly on GSS, but if you click on his profile, it should pop up his twitter. his twitter bio has a link and has his Discord contacts, highly reccomend talking to him he said that he really liked us 2 theorizing o_O and yeahs!

3/10/23, 5:32 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Cool. I'll give in a shot. I'd love chatting directly with our super creative author.
3/10/23, 5:04 AM
He swallows that load and accepts his place!!
3/10/23, 4:38 AM
Curious how it will end. Will max get turned back? Will he still want a master?
3/10/23, 3:21 AM
for one, the Superpower/magic system is incredibly and intricately thorough and thought out. there's like drawbacks for abusing or even using power, something that I don't see often being discussed, and that could be really interesting down the line. the checks and balances used makes the Superpowers incredibly "realistic" in a way that animates it and makes it so ground in reality
3/9/23, 6:36 PM
So happy you brought this amazing story to this site!! Excited to see more of your work too. 🥰

benedick543
3/10/23, 3:54 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thanks for introducing me to this platform! I'm working on other stories in the series as well!
3/10/23, 3:51 AM
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read here! I have to say it’s AMAZING to see representation from a group that almost never shows up on the site, and you manage to make that representation part of the story. Add the incredible descriptions, perfect pace of the masturbation scene, and the genuine love between the two guys, and you have a fantastic tale. Well done! :D
3/10/23, 2:24 AM
Somehow the fact that these guys are dirt poor and living in a garage just feels perfect. you really nailed the setting here. And of course the sex is just dynamite.
3/10/23, 1:10 AM
FIRST ALSO HELLO FELLOW INSOMNIACS :wink:
3/10/23, 1:00 AM
Excellent story, always love hair growth, especially facial hair. The pic was perfect and made him even hotter. Definitely needs to be continued. I would also suggest trying more length and a more detailed transformation.
Jack
3/10/23, 1:00 AM
Would it be possible to get another, say, thousand chapters of this? It's really fucking great