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3/9/23, 4:59 PM
> It’s this collar. It’s changing people. It’s fulfilling my fantasies, but… this isn’t fair on him. He has a life. You know, this was a great start to this story, and I don't actually see a lot of masculinization stories here (much more likely to see twinkification), so that's a really nice twist, but what really struck me was that one line I quoted above. It is _shocking_ how little authors consider this in their stories. And sure, it's a throwaway line, but I appreciate that the protagonist at least considered it. (This isn't to say that I haven't appreciated a "forced change" story or four hundred on the site, it's just...sometimes it's nice to be reminded)
3/9/23, 4:50 PM
I literally can’t wait for part 2, this is gonna shape up to be something exciting
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 3:28 PM
Hot
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 2:47 PM
Really enjoyed the woman hypnotist here. The objectification and the change in sexuality within an established relationship was hot.
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 2:20 PM
This was tremendously good.
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3/9/23, 2:00 PM
This was amazing!
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 1:47 PM
Enjoyed the premise of the plot. Would love more expanded hypno parts
3/7/23, 10:55 PM
I gotta say, I'm really obsessed with this story. As the days pass, I check my phone more and more frequently for the next chapter to drop. One thing interesting in this chapter is the switch in POV to Luxor at the end. I wonder if we'll get more different POVs as the story progresses. So far, we've had the King of Beasts/Pet/DS-011 in the Prologue, Jamie throughout the rest, and now this bit of Luxor. What I'd really like to see is the inner workings of the mind of a fully converted superdrone, especially one of the former heroes - Dusk, Horizon, or even Goliath.

3/8/23, 6:00 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) something that i've wondered is the amount of "smartness" (for the lack of better term) every drone has. like for example in the prologue, Pet kinda seemed as if his thoughts were incredibly simple/dilated, similar to the first occurence in chapter 4 of Jamie; contrast that to Dusk who seemed to be incredibly persuasive and quickthinking while still loving Master a lot also yeah idk what about this series but its ADDICTING

3/8/23, 1:45 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) See below

3/8/23, 4:48 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Now my answer to your question is appearing above. Anyway, if you look, you'll hopefully find it.

3/9/23, 11:45 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) ah found it, thanks! i think that you are right in the presumptions. im curious to know how the mental merging of the consciousness would work, that's something that always i think can be so heartfelt where 2 different individuals, despite their differences, can be united and merged into one being, one entity, one soul theres so much more deeper lore (like how did the teeth and insides become latexed acc to jamie? and is Dusk the only one where Master is seen to "possess" the body? etc. etc.) but yeah this is fun to figure out all these lore tidbits in this super hot and sexy series
3/9/23, 9:13 AM
Loved this chapter and hope you continue with chapter 2 soon.
3/9/23, 9:03 AM
Hi! Any update on your progresses? Are you going to be able to post that mid-march-non-really promised update? I hope you are doing fine with your personal life projects and you can find energy at some point to keep our juices flowing! Hugs from Spain!