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3/9/23, 6:10 PM
I definitely caught the Altered Carbon influence, and well done on that (I loved watching the series); I personally am not huge on chastity, so the end threw me a bit, but every moment up until then was incredibly hot to me, and I'm sure that kink works on tons of folks, so I certainly don't dock you for it. Very, very well-written.
SocalDracon6
3/9/23, 3:46 PM
Read it 10 years ago and read it again this week (It took me a week to get through it because I came so many times in between) Still one of the hottest fuc*** stories Ive enjoyed. Thanks

3/9/23, 6:09 PM
@SocalDracon6 I'm happy to hear that. For me, this story isn't so much "strokeable" as it is "thought fodder for later stroking" -- I always found this chapter to be more thought-provoking than out and out horny. Glad it had that effect on you -- even after all this time.
Elm
3/9/23, 5:32 PM
Really good! (As always), still there are a few typos (Names mostly, you confuse Ray with Harry in some sentences). Overall I liked it! Always nice to get a story from you!
3/9/23, 5:31 PM
This was a really intriguing story -- frankly I'd read an entire novel of this, a slower burn as it were. Very well done!
3/9/23, 5:24 PM
I find myself wondering what are John's plans exactly when his nephew doesn't go home, or even when John's brother comes for his son? Cause the way things are going it's possibly already starting to get out of his control. Welp, karma and all that :laughing:
3/9/23, 4:59 PM
> It’s this collar. It’s changing people. It’s fulfilling my fantasies, but… this isn’t fair on him. He has a life. You know, this was a great start to this story, and I don't actually see a lot of masculinization stories here (much more likely to see twinkification), so that's a really nice twist, but what really struck me was that one line I quoted above. It is _shocking_ how little authors consider this in their stories. And sure, it's a throwaway line, but I appreciate that the protagonist at least considered it. (This isn't to say that I haven't appreciated a "forced change" story or four hundred on the site, it's just...sometimes it's nice to be reminded)
3/9/23, 4:50 PM
I literally can’t wait for part 2, this is gonna shape up to be something exciting
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 3:28 PM
Hot
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 2:47 PM
Really enjoyed the woman hypnotist here. The objectification and the change in sexuality within an established relationship was hot.
Mar 9, 2023
3/9/23, 2:20 PM
This was tremendously good.