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Mar 21, 2021
Geronimo
3/8/23, 11:01 PM
I love this
rwriter51
3/8/23, 10:51 PM
Awesome new edition to your stable of horny boys. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. You had me dripping!
3/8/23, 6:20 PM
After pondering the matter during a morning walk, I have reached the conclusion that I will withdraw this piece from the site. It is better to take the _fei_ (非) and put the brush down than to let the brush meander aimlessly toward a _shi_ (是) that will never come. I leave the piece up for today; tomorrow I will remove it from the site. Deepest apologies for letting my unworthy words appear in public.

3/8/23, 6:49 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Please don't take down your story! I enjoyed this first part, and I've been really looking forward to seeing it continue. But maybe think about doing a quick edit and changing the product name. The story could then still be _inspired_ by "Cycle One," but you wouldn't have to worry about whether you're observing enough of the rules of the fictional universe Absman420 created.

3/8/23, 7:53 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) You're lucky I like you and hold you in so much esteem. At first, I thought it couldn't work with a name change, but then again it could. So let's give it a try.

3/8/23, 10:34 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) "Phase Two"--I love it!
Pupatlas
3/8/23, 10:11 PM
Absolutely loving this series! Found it earlier today and I'm already eager for the next installment! Really enjoying how things have been coming together
3/8/23, 7:55 PM
_Extremely_ well-written start. I'm impressed how much descriptiveness you managed in relatively few words!
3/8/23, 7:40 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I am interested to note what I find arounsing and what I don't. The development of a meaningful life pleasing other is fascinating and really sexy. The end doesn't;t quite do it for me, just a little too far. On rereading the story I might find ti more arousing. It felt worthwhile reading it; there was a lot of it and it felt substantial.
3/8/23, 7:27 PM
What a very interesting development to this story! Lots of interesting potential to this alien figure, both in terms of the steamy stuff and plot (will James try to hide him? What sort of antics will that create as he’s almost caught, and what would keeping such a big secret mean for how James feels about their relationship?). Cool potential here.
3/8/23, 6:39 PM
A well paced start that kept my interest. I want to read more. I hit the story as I had searched for puffer jacket. I would love to see what you can do with that.
3/8/23, 6:28 PM
Reading the story makes me feel really good. I like the ambiguity of the black grease/cum, and the link between the jacket and his masculinity.I want more. I like the way the story progresses.
3/8/23, 5:51 PM
This was great! And I love that the alias was Dick Greyson, heh.