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May 1, 2022
Mike Davis
3/8/23, 5:24 AM
I'd change places with Ben any day to get a daddy like David. What a great story.
Anonymous
3/6/23, 12:55 PM
Super hot but I kind of wish Jason would get the tables turned on him. Thomas seemed like a decent guy

3/7/23, 2:08 AM
@Anonymous Totally agree

3/8/23, 4:22 AM
@Anonymous Thought so too
fry
3/8/23, 3:49 AM
Well done! Can't wait to read more! Many possible turns and avenues this can take.
3/7/23, 3:12 PM
One word: AMAZING!!!! This was ridiculously hot. Good job!

3/8/23, 12:32 AM
Thank you for the read. Glad you enjoyed😊 @[Spooky.ghost](/user/show/10034016)
3/8/23, 12:04 AM
Oo, Eden. Lucky guy. He's definitely going to land on his feet. Or at least on all fours once they help that knee. ;)
3/7/23, 10:36 PM
Another great chapter. Having self denial cause the loss in sweetness was a cool idea. Guess Paul really just has to stop neglecting his mate and pleasure them both to keep his milk fresh and sweet.
3/7/23, 7:37 AM
Definitely a promising beginning. I know you don't like to put a lot of explicit sexual scenes in your stories, so we probably won't be getting many of the erotically-charged locker room scenes that were some of my favorite parts of "Cycle One." But I hope you can give us more of a sense of the uncanny personality changes that the other gym patrons are going through. Without that context, our narrator just seems absurdly hostile towards Eric. (Yes, we know he's up to no good because we've read the other "Cycle One" stories; but there should be more foreshadowing, so that this story can also stand on its own).

3/7/23, 9:54 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Always happy to see you respond to my work. I won't get into the locker room scenes as that's not my focus or take on the story. But there is a dream sequence with some grinding that I hope might fit into what you're looking for. The personality changes will be there; our dear narrator has to undergo some changes.
3/7/23, 9:15 PM
I grew up with the Hardy Boys, and secretly had a crush on both of them in junior high. I guarantee I would still be reading them if they got this steamy!
3/7/23, 9:12 PM
I liked it a lot. Fleshlight TF is hot.
3/7/23, 9:07 PM
Damn, this was incredible. Love what you’ve done with the initial curse and it would be great to see more of how these three men struggle to convince themselves they’re still great. Also, I’d love a story that starts with the same curse but a different (stricter) interpretation. To wit, any man who sees Brad’s ass must inevitably fuck it, once he does he becomes gay, and Brad can only get off from being fucked. But what if Brad remains straight and is fully aware of the curse? In other words, he’s a big instigator in these stories, but what if he stayed truly straight but needed to begrudgingly entrap guys to fuck him whenever his horniness got so high that he just had to get off? Would also love hints of what happened to Brad in the showers (even if it would be implausible for the first person narrator to see it directly) Awesome story.