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3/9/23, 12:46 AM
🔥😏😈
Feb 26, 2012
3/9/23, 12:22 AM
Ah, the turnabouts multiple times here are the best!
3/9/23, 12:10 AM
Loved this! Especially the reinforcement of awake and refreshed. I did feel a bit sorry for the narrator though; he seemed like a nice guy.
3/8/23, 11:54 PM
I actually really like the story as written. It packs a lot in a tight space! And I gotta say, I love power bottoms with big wavy hard dicks, so...you certainly hit my erogenous zones ;-)
Mar 21, 2021
Geronimo
3/8/23, 11:01 PM
I love this
rwriter51
3/8/23, 10:51 PM
Awesome new edition to your stable of horny boys. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. You had me dripping!
3/8/23, 6:20 PM
After pondering the matter during a morning walk, I have reached the conclusion that I will withdraw this piece from the site. It is better to take the _fei_ (非) and put the brush down than to let the brush meander aimlessly toward a _shi_ (是) that will never come. I leave the piece up for today; tomorrow I will remove it from the site. Deepest apologies for letting my unworthy words appear in public.

3/8/23, 6:49 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Please don't take down your story! I enjoyed this first part, and I've been really looking forward to seeing it continue. But maybe think about doing a quick edit and changing the product name. The story could then still be _inspired_ by "Cycle One," but you wouldn't have to worry about whether you're observing enough of the rules of the fictional universe Absman420 created.

3/8/23, 7:53 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) You're lucky I like you and hold you in so much esteem. At first, I thought it couldn't work with a name change, but then again it could. So let's give it a try.

3/8/23, 10:34 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) "Phase Two"--I love it!
Pupatlas
3/8/23, 10:11 PM
Absolutely loving this series! Found it earlier today and I'm already eager for the next installment! Really enjoying how things have been coming together
3/8/23, 7:55 PM
_Extremely_ well-written start. I'm impressed how much descriptiveness you managed in relatively few words!
3/8/23, 7:40 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I am interested to note what I find arounsing and what I don't. The development of a meaningful life pleasing other is fascinating and really sexy. The end doesn't;t quite do it for me, just a little too far. On rereading the story I might find ti more arousing. It felt worthwhile reading it; there was a lot of it and it felt substantial.