Recent Comments

3/6/23, 4:49 AM
Uggggggggggh he's gotta give in eventually, right?! But I say Option 2, he runs. More changes would be fun.

Anonymous
3/6/23, 8:55 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) He does -- it's a branched story. If you go back a chapter, you can click option 1 to see him give in instead.
3/6/23, 8:23 PM
This was so good. I always wanted to write a story like this where underwear was the reason someone changed.
3/6/23, 7:54 PM
Oh man! So glad you have returned.
REDMAN Richard
3/6/23, 7:41 PM
I am a uniformed valet, and I am happy with that!
2/24/23, 2:46 PM
I’m curious how this is a Cupid story when it reads as a straight mind control story. Mark is totally controlled, mind fucked to oblivion, and has no grasp on reality. Don’t get me wrong, this is a good spiral story. But as a romance, it makes me shudder.

3/6/23, 2:37 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I do think this one has a little bit of romance in it, not as romantic but as Alex being taken care of by his controller, opposed to being treated badly just for the sake of being mean or being sold off to stranger who has tendency to amputate or snuff him out.
3/6/23, 2:11 PM
Do we get to vote? Continue then…
3/6/23, 12:19 PM
Loved the progression of obedience and the change in writing as he was going under. Enjoyed this
3/6/23, 11:48 AM
Returned for another joyous read. Imagining live models for an art class with one remaining human student...
Jim
3/6/23, 7:46 AM
Torn now - which way ? Let’s try option two once more