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3/5/23, 9:15 PM
Great ending.
3/5/23, 9:12 PM
Superbement bien écrit, très agréable de lire un récit entrant autant dans les détails, j'adore ton style. Un peu "déçu" par la tournure très traditionnelle qu'a pris l'histoire, je pensais que notre beau nageur finirait hypnotisé comme il est de coutume sur ce site... peut-être pour la prochaine fois :smiley:
Eks
3/5/23, 8:06 PM
Super :) je revenais justement de la piscine haha
3/5/23, 7:40 PM
i really like the yin yang contrast between 013 and 005, one is shadowy while one holds the power of the stars in light, just something that is cool
3/5/23, 6:59 PM
Love,love,love this so far!! I can't wait to see what spells he picks and thr changes that ensue. Hope there's some cock shrinking !
Anonymous
3/2/23, 6:57 PM
Interesting way to grab the main character's attention. Story had me hooked from the beginning too. I liked the slow draw in and then capture. My favourite story in this genre now.

3/5/23, 6:59 PM
@Anonymous The inspiration came from sitting at the bar at Applebees in the Northwest and the guy across from me had red nails. I asked the bartender and she said, yeah, he does that sometimes. He was an EMT it seemed given the jacket and stethoscope.
3/5/23, 6:57 PM
Oh man, I don’t know anymore. After reading the other option 1 branch and how it actually works with this branch I’m like, do it all! But either way, does this mean we will have a third reality? My head just exploded. Can’t wait for both new branches now.
3/5/23, 6:52 PM
Didn’t think I was gonna like option 1, but DAMN!