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3/5/23, 4:27 AM
New Olympic sports! Yes!
Anonymous
3/5/23, 4:13 AM
so dark; so hot; great story
3/4/23, 5:24 PM
Definitely option 2. It would be especially amusing if he can use the notebook to turn Micah into his submissive service top.

3/5/23, 4:07 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I vote for this idea too~ Turn the tables on Micah~
3/5/23, 3:13 AM
Very hot can hardly wait for the next installment
3/4/23, 3:31 AM
It didn't end up going the way I wanted -- Rusty is too much of a genuine immature asshole, focused solely on his own pleasure and stereotypes, and Carter never really seemed to mentally want what Rusty was demanding of him, even when the physical changes led him down that path -- but as always, your writing skills are really formidable, and I loved how you incorporated RPG into this. Hope you pick it back up someday!

3/5/23, 2:29 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) It ain't over 'til it's over, as they say. I have a big slate of probably another 5 chapters in mind (tentatively titled "A Jock Like Me: Chronicles of Pornia"), I just have a lot of other WIPs I'd like to wrap up first.
3/4/23, 5:30 AM
Great start. I love the cliffhanger.

peachy
3/4/23, 8:05 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) thanks so much!

3/5/23, 2:02 AM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) You're welcome!
3/5/23, 12:13 AM
So i THINK I know who wrote this, so it will be nice to see how right/ wrong I am. This story really doesn't read as long as it is, which is nice. I'm 100% ok with the turnaround on Joaquin; Marcos was always fairly kind to Oscar even after the changes, but he also got those by repeatedly violating him, so i can't really blame Oscar here. Obviously the correct solution would have just been to tell Oscar, let him make some changes, and then seal the deal, but Joaquin never would have let that happen (and it didn't occur to Marcos either). Would have liked for them to keep their muscles and still been submissive to the much larger Oscar, but thematically this probably works better. Also would have liked Oscar to actually have become the scaled lizard things from the dreams, but that's just me being a pervert :wink:

Sebastián Apollo
3/5/23, 12:47 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Thank you for the kind comment and your thoughts! As explained in another comment, the idea was that the story could be read in segments, so hopefully the big word count doesn't intimidate would-be readers! Thank you for sharing your interpenetration about the relationship between the three brothers. While I agree that Joaquin definitely deserved what happened to him, Marcos definitely had many flaws and wasn't innocent either. My personal view was that Marcos would've **never** given up the tome - his pride and ego, while not as abrasive as Joaquin's, was much more seeded and came through in his attempts to manipulate others and the situation. > So i THINK I know who wrote this, so it will be nice to see how right/ wrong I am. We shall see! 😉

3/5/23, 1:27 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh yeah, i agree on Marcos, i just WISH he was less of an ass. Joaquin is the guy who gets bullied when young, but when he gets power lords it over others and acts like HE can't be a bully. Marcos meanwhile is the guy who thinks he's much smarter than everyone else, and NEEDS to be, and resents when others who he perceives as "lesser" are successful or when he's not rewarded for doing things "correctly". I'd like to think Oscar will be better than them, but he's been having a tough few weeks when he made the wishes, so he'll probably actually fuck his father in the ass and abuse his power a wee bit :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: At least his mother will be proud of her, big, strong, little bit boy?
3/5/23, 12:49 AM
It's so hot