Recent Comments

Nutiper
3/4/23, 11:47 PM
Hot damn! I know this story is long for the site, but this is a great read! I love the premise of the reality-changing notebook and how the two brothers use it to turn themselves into buff hung studs... and even better, I love the turnabout twist at the end, where the youngest brother turns the tables on them, and gets his older bros totally in love with being fucked by him. Fantastic stuff! And the writing style is very warm, and fun. I enjoyed this a lot. Five stars!

Sebastián Apollo
3/5/23, 12:32 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the kind words! The word count was a point of contention for me, but I figured that since it was broken up by day, then it could be read in bite-sized chunks if the reader wished to do so. The twist at the end was a lot of fun and something I thought up early in the outlining process, so I'm glad you've enjoyed it as well! Thank for for the special note on the writing style - while I knew the idea of "occult" lends itself to the ominous and horror, I also wanted to make something fun as well.
3/4/23, 11:42 PM
Really would like to c more supernatural stuff either way……either option is fine w/ me just wanna c more supernatural lust & maybe some furries…..
3/4/23, 10:57 PM
Option 2. It's really hot to see a guy struggle against something like this. To try to convince himself it's not true. Even as he accidentally gets triggered and corrupted by others.
Anonymous
3/4/23, 10:56 PM
Oh my god, this is hilarious. I hope Xavier gets to meet other people in this fascinating, zany supernatural building regardless of which choice he makes. I wonder if there's a connection between the hearts Golbo'gog needs and the heart on the tattoo...
Jan 2, 2015
mic
3/4/23, 10:54 PM
wow great story, love the humilation and ideas, more please
3/4/23, 9:43 PM
Very hot story! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Jack develops!
Jim
3/4/23, 9:28 PM
Great so far Option 2 I think
3/4/23, 8:57 PM
Suddenly I want to find some old abandoned military boots and put them on :sweat_smile: :smiling_imp:
3/4/23, 7:11 PM
This was an absolutely great new chapter. Can’t wait.

Vano Stories
3/4/23, 8:09 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks!

3/4/23, 8:32 PM
@[Vano Stories](/user/show/10030747) you’re welcome! And thanks for keeping my friend Jackoff in the story! Lol. So besides people suddenly forgetting him, what happens to his stuff? Car, bank account, clothes, etc? Does all that just disappear, or does ownership transfer to Merlin? Maybe that will help Merlin with his wardrobe challenges? Hope Jackoff adapts to his expanded use. 😜