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3/4/23, 5:30 AM
Great start. I love the cliffhanger.

peachy
3/4/23, 8:05 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) thanks so much!

3/5/23, 2:02 AM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) You're welcome!
3/5/23, 12:13 AM
So i THINK I know who wrote this, so it will be nice to see how right/ wrong I am. This story really doesn't read as long as it is, which is nice. I'm 100% ok with the turnaround on Joaquin; Marcos was always fairly kind to Oscar even after the changes, but he also got those by repeatedly violating him, so i can't really blame Oscar here. Obviously the correct solution would have just been to tell Oscar, let him make some changes, and then seal the deal, but Joaquin never would have let that happen (and it didn't occur to Marcos either). Would have liked for them to keep their muscles and still been submissive to the much larger Oscar, but thematically this probably works better. Also would have liked Oscar to actually have become the scaled lizard things from the dreams, but that's just me being a pervert :wink:

Sebastián Apollo
3/5/23, 12:47 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Thank you for the kind comment and your thoughts! As explained in another comment, the idea was that the story could be read in segments, so hopefully the big word count doesn't intimidate would-be readers! Thank you for sharing your interpenetration about the relationship between the three brothers. While I agree that Joaquin definitely deserved what happened to him, Marcos definitely had many flaws and wasn't innocent either. My personal view was that Marcos would've **never** given up the tome - his pride and ego, while not as abrasive as Joaquin's, was much more seeded and came through in his attempts to manipulate others and the situation. > So i THINK I know who wrote this, so it will be nice to see how right/ wrong I am. We shall see! 😉

3/5/23, 1:27 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh yeah, i agree on Marcos, i just WISH he was less of an ass. Joaquin is the guy who gets bullied when young, but when he gets power lords it over others and acts like HE can't be a bully. Marcos meanwhile is the guy who thinks he's much smarter than everyone else, and NEEDS to be, and resents when others who he perceives as "lesser" are successful or when he's not rewarded for doing things "correctly". I'd like to think Oscar will be better than them, but he's been having a tough few weeks when he made the wishes, so he'll probably actually fuck his father in the ass and abuse his power a wee bit :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: At least his mother will be proud of her, big, strong, little bit boy?
3/5/23, 12:49 AM
It's so hot
Nutiper
3/4/23, 11:47 PM
Hot damn! I know this story is long for the site, but this is a great read! I love the premise of the reality-changing notebook and how the two brothers use it to turn themselves into buff hung studs... and even better, I love the turnabout twist at the end, where the youngest brother turns the tables on them, and gets his older bros totally in love with being fucked by him. Fantastic stuff! And the writing style is very warm, and fun. I enjoyed this a lot. Five stars!

Sebastián Apollo
3/5/23, 12:32 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the kind words! The word count was a point of contention for me, but I figured that since it was broken up by day, then it could be read in bite-sized chunks if the reader wished to do so. The twist at the end was a lot of fun and something I thought up early in the outlining process, so I'm glad you've enjoyed it as well! Thank for for the special note on the writing style - while I knew the idea of "occult" lends itself to the ominous and horror, I also wanted to make something fun as well.
3/4/23, 11:42 PM
Really would like to c more supernatural stuff either way……either option is fine w/ me just wanna c more supernatural lust & maybe some furries…..
3/4/23, 10:57 PM
Option 2. It's really hot to see a guy struggle against something like this. To try to convince himself it's not true. Even as he accidentally gets triggered and corrupted by others.
Anonymous
3/4/23, 10:56 PM
Oh my god, this is hilarious. I hope Xavier gets to meet other people in this fascinating, zany supernatural building regardless of which choice he makes. I wonder if there's a connection between the hearts Golbo'gog needs and the heart on the tattoo...
Jan 2, 2015
mic
3/4/23, 10:54 PM
wow great story, love the humilation and ideas, more please
3/4/23, 9:43 PM
Very hot story! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Jack develops!