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3/4/23, 6:15 AM
Looking forward to more of this!
3/4/23, 5:23 AM
Hm.... I vote option 2, to see how long he can help it before he corrupts himself! love the story so far
3/4/23, 4:30 AM
I know i complained about John's methods last chapter (mostly for fun), but I'm really hoping "Jack" (maybe with the help of Jackie) turns the tables on him.
3/4/23, 3:02 AM
This was a very fun series! And I’m a bit enbarassed to admit I did search on Amazon for a mind or body control ring. I’m glad the main character got to find love and have a happy ending. Over all this was an awesome story. Thanks DW for writing it!
3/4/23, 12:30 AM
I definitely enjoyed this story, but the ending leaves a question. What happens to a Pad Pig? They hypnotize themselves into feeling and being fused with their football gear; so what happens to them? Are they standing around not really doing much? The narrative speaks of trying to travel and get through TSA, but what sort of life does a Pad Pig have once they reached the end of the challenge?
3/4/23, 12:11 AM
I was going to comment how hypnotically fugue-like your dialogue always is. It’s a huge turn on, and really extends the build to the story’s climax! All that is still true. But having just read your comment, I’ll say that it has been a real real pleasure reading your works. Hearing about your health difficulties, I can only say that my heart goes out to you. I hope you can forge a road to some state of recovery. And I wish you all the best. Thanks and be well.
Island Jock
3/3/23, 6:12 PM
Truest an epic story. Very well done!

3/3/23, 11:08 PM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Cheers! I appreciate it!