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3/4/23, 12:30 AM
I definitely enjoyed this story, but the ending leaves a question. What happens to a Pad Pig? They hypnotize themselves into feeling and being fused with their football gear; so what happens to them? Are they standing around not really doing much? The narrative speaks of trying to travel and get through TSA, but what sort of life does a Pad Pig have once they reached the end of the challenge?
3/4/23, 12:11 AM
I was going to comment how hypnotically fugue-like your dialogue always is. It’s a huge turn on, and really extends the build to the story’s climax! All that is still true. But having just read your comment, I’ll say that it has been a real real pleasure reading your works. Hearing about your health difficulties, I can only say that my heart goes out to you. I hope you can forge a road to some state of recovery. And I wish you all the best. Thanks and be well.
Island Jock
3/3/23, 6:12 PM
Truest an epic story. Very well done!

3/3/23, 11:08 PM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Cheers! I appreciate it!
3/3/23, 8:29 AM
I love that Chris figured out it was Max. That's really awesome. I'm also so glad Max got away so Thiago doesn't lose him. Though their relationship is tricky now.

3/3/23, 9:47 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks Evan, yes, it was enjoyable for them to have that moment.
Titan
3/3/23, 2:44 AM
Thanks for continuing, it has been addictive reading even if it’s not for everyone. At the end of the day you have created a great piece that doesn’t have to have sex all the way through it and I agree that any beastiallity would not work here.

3/3/23, 9:46 PM
@Titan Thanks so much, great to hear that you've been addicted to reading!
Vanos Stories
3/3/23, 6:48 PM
Hope you enjoyed! Chapter 3 is already finished and will be published next week, which should hopefully give me enough time to have chapter 4 ready for the week after.
3/3/23, 5:28 PM
This is already so hot. I hope we get to read about more men getting changed into cows, but I also want to see more about Kalmin getting Paul to submit :hot_face:
3/3/23, 5:17 PM
Alan was a _great_ antagonist. I loved it when Rob would bring more artifacts, clearly under a geas to do so, only to have Alan pop up in some nook and take them off Rob's hapless hands, forcing him back out there. I do think a lot of fun could be had with those artifacts and their potential powers other than powering an ectoplasmic forge, but I get where you're going with this and am delighted to be along for the ride. (I loved the description of the betamax making everything taste purple earlier in the story :-) )
3/3/23, 4:51 PM
This is a simply spectacular story, and you should be proud of your writing in it. God, I _really_ love what you've done here. A great paranormal mystery with a bit of Warehouse 13 (only good), and of course your usual amazing sex scenes.
3/3/23, 3:20 PM
I liked this story... because it was written by my friend Cockatrice, who is a fantastic human being!