Recent Comments

Titan
3/3/23, 2:44 AM
Thanks for continuing, it has been addictive reading even if it’s not for everyone. At the end of the day you have created a great piece that doesn’t have to have sex all the way through it and I agree that any beastiallity would not work here.

3/3/23, 9:46 PM
@Titan Thanks so much, great to hear that you've been addicted to reading!
Vanos Stories
3/3/23, 6:48 PM
Hope you enjoyed! Chapter 3 is already finished and will be published next week, which should hopefully give me enough time to have chapter 4 ready for the week after.
3/3/23, 5:28 PM
This is already so hot. I hope we get to read about more men getting changed into cows, but I also want to see more about Kalmin getting Paul to submit :hot_face:
3/3/23, 5:17 PM
Alan was a _great_ antagonist. I loved it when Rob would bring more artifacts, clearly under a geas to do so, only to have Alan pop up in some nook and take them off Rob's hapless hands, forcing him back out there. I do think a lot of fun could be had with those artifacts and their potential powers other than powering an ectoplasmic forge, but I get where you're going with this and am delighted to be along for the ride. (I loved the description of the betamax making everything taste purple earlier in the story :-) )
3/3/23, 4:51 PM
This is a simply spectacular story, and you should be proud of your writing in it. God, I _really_ love what you've done here. A great paranormal mystery with a bit of Warehouse 13 (only good), and of course your usual amazing sex scenes.
3/3/23, 3:20 PM
I liked this story... because it was written by my friend Cockatrice, who is a fantastic human being!
Anonymous
3/3/23, 3:16 PM
Would love to see a third chapter!
Anonymous
3/3/23, 4:04 AM
first reading this 6 years later, but damn it's really really good! i was worried about the number of characters, but each cast member got a hot and well constructed transformation as well as an ending that felt... i don't know, punishing but not overly mean? you're definitely one of my favorite authors on the site, and i'm so glad i finally got around to checking this out

screamingmoist
3/3/23, 1:16 PM
@Anonymous Glad you checked it out! I've always wanted to go back and give this one a fresh polish. It got posted here in 2016, but I actually wrote the bulk of it in like 2011 or 2012? It would be fun to go back and do a "remaster" now that I have a bit more experience.
3/3/23, 9:29 AM
Love it! Some absolutely amazing ideas and such detail in the mind control process.

3/3/23, 12:07 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
3/3/23, 5:19 AM
I’m so invested in the story! I just love the way you write. I hope we get a new chapter of this series in between the other amazing stories you do!