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Anonymous
3/3/23, 3:16 PM
Would love to see a third chapter!
Anonymous
3/3/23, 4:04 AM
first reading this 6 years later, but damn it's really really good! i was worried about the number of characters, but each cast member got a hot and well constructed transformation as well as an ending that felt... i don't know, punishing but not overly mean? you're definitely one of my favorite authors on the site, and i'm so glad i finally got around to checking this out

screamingmoist
3/3/23, 1:16 PM
@Anonymous Glad you checked it out! I've always wanted to go back and give this one a fresh polish. It got posted here in 2016, but I actually wrote the bulk of it in like 2011 or 2012? It would be fun to go back and do a "remaster" now that I have a bit more experience.
3/3/23, 9:29 AM
Love it! Some absolutely amazing ideas and such detail in the mind control process.

3/3/23, 12:07 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
3/3/23, 5:19 AM
I’m so invested in the story! I just love the way you write. I hope we get a new chapter of this series in between the other amazing stories you do!
3/3/23, 4:39 AM
Oh dear. You have positively destroyed a story I was writing by writing something much better and more fun. I'd be annoyed if I wasn't having such a blast reading this!
3/3/23, 4:10 AM
So glad to see this back. I went back to the beginning and reread all of it together. So amazing. As far as who “wins”, I’m kind of a romantic, so I’d like Ethan to end up with his brother Sam, and Tony and Devon to become lovers. Drew can end up with his dad, Lyle. Peter and Blake care for each other, so why not? That leaves Jiang. But he’s become Tanner, Junior. His story can continue somewhere else. But no matter what, I will be happy. But I’m also wondering, if Jiang didn’t want to kiss Peter because he might transfer his new powers if he did?
3/3/23, 12:36 AM
super hot
3/3/23, 12:27 AM
hot!!!
3/3/23, 12:02 AM
The mental image of cocks just bursting out of pants and bobbing around is insanely erotic. What a great story!!
3/2/23, 9:57 PM
Very excited to be able to continue the journey with Max. The writing is good, the story is good!

3/2/23, 11:31 PM
@[Alubo1988](/user/show/1409939) Aww thank you so much, you're so kind. Glad you're here for the journey!