Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/2/23, 12:14 AM
Another great chapter! I'm a sucker for porn with a plot, so very excited to hear that this is moving more in that direction. If I could soapbox a bit, I totally get that in the hypno genre generally and with drones specifically, it's a very fine line between too much and too little exposition. Too little and obviously it's difficult to get invested. But I also think a big part, if not the main part of drones' appeal is their inscrutability; the feeling that their motives are totally alien and possibly unknowable(beyond that sexy sexy assimilation of course!), so too much exposition can kind of ruin the magic too. I think it's wise to hew closer to the limited, pre- to during conversion POV as you suggest. But regardless of how you take it, I'm definitely hooked. All of your couples have been really likeable so far, but Ethan and Derek's dynamic is especially heartwarming and I hope they get to go on a big adventure ~~before their inevitable conversion~~
Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:47 PM
do you have a patreon @Neon Demon ?

3/1/23, 3:23 PM
@Anonymous I don't although I've always liked the idea. If I get more into writing and writing consistently, I might, but at the moment I don't think I'm good enough at writing to post frequently enough. Also I don't think I'm that talented enough yet :sweat_smile:

3/1/23, 5:51 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) You might consider alternatives. Patreon has some pretty severe limitations on allowed content and they jive poorly with the type of stories normally posted here.

3/1/23, 11:44 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) you are definitely talented enough! and the quality of every story is WAYYY more than enough compared to any quantity
3/1/23, 8:11 PM
Fuck yeah! I feel so dumb, so like a jock now!! Why I missed this story before? It hit lots of my favorite materials!!

3/1/23, 10:32 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Thank you! I like this story, too -- although it got to be significantly longer than I'd initially expected. I wish the twins had had sex at the end, now that I read it fifteen years later.
Martin
3/1/23, 9:26 PM
Such a lovely continuation of that story!
Connor
3/1/23, 8:02 PM
now THAT made my dick leak! great story. i luv a big, hairy man. . . [look what u made me do ;)](https://twitter.com/pike5280/status/1600584917024325633/photo/1)
3/1/23, 5:45 PM
So glad you came back to this.

3/1/23, 8:01 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks! The subjects enjoyed it too hehehe.
Anonymous
3/1/23, 6:17 PM
such a hot story… a follow up would be amazing!!!
Anonymous
3/1/23, 6:00 PM
hot!!!
3/1/23, 5:08 PM
I will do that when I finish reading the second part!
Elm
3/1/23, 4:38 PM
What a great story, loved the induction and the way Austin tried to resist before forgetting he ever did...