Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:00 AM
master can turn me into a puppy drone uwu
2/28/23, 7:43 PM
I gotta wonder how Myriad is going to make Jamie/Rocket Kid the greatest and most powerful superhero in the world? Especially with all the top heroes he's gonna have to contend with.

Anonymous
3/1/23, 12:58 AM
@[Wolfboy77](/user/show/10002587) I hope that Master can change Jamie into a super super SUPER drone =))))))
2/28/23, 10:09 PM
As a huge fan of your Christmas Muzak series, where the toy section with the Saudi guy and the military man was my fave, I'd love to see something like that again. Would also be really hot to see a daddy top style situation similar to the first chapter of that series (though I'd wished to have known more about how the daddy would have adjusted what his boy would wear from then on 😆). Some kind of pup play/bondage chapter would also be really cool.
2/28/23, 9:36 PM
I love the budding romance hidden in this transformation story. Very cute, and not a little bit sweet.
Test
2/28/23, 9:29 PM
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
2/28/23, 7:18 PM
Sorry but this is unreadable. I think you need to find an editor, or if English isn’t your first language, maybe publish in the language your most comfortable with and see if someone can translate.
Anonymous
2/28/23, 5:49 PM
it was ok, I liked the idea of hypno,,, but would rather the boys should only focus on Mr Z, it could have been with every customer the stoner had just made him desire Mr. Z
2/28/23, 5:23 PM
Usually I never comment like this but this was a difficult, almost impossible read.
2/28/23, 3:34 AM
I hate to be the first one to comment. It very much needs more fleshing out. Why all of the sudden did they have lust in their eyes. Why did they fuck like that. Just there are so many holes and gaps to make the story. Not just hard to follow along with, but makes it just flat unenjoyable. “I’ve been keeping track on how many times you guys came. Kaito came 4 times, Kanoashi came 3 times. I came 7 times and the absolute slut is Austin who came 19 times in the past 3 hours” said Refias. I found that extremely jarring in an already jarring story. This isn't meant to tear down your art. I would like to see you improve on this same story expand, and grow.

Anonymous
2/28/23, 8:15 AM
@[HnT Boy](/user/show/87763) this is my first time writing a NSFW story so it would make sense that it sucks so bad. in the future, i might continuing or fixing this story

Martin
2/28/23, 5:22 PM
@Anonymous Don't get discouraged! You only get better with practice. And reading a lot of other stories. You might get inspired, too :)
Feb 25, 2023
2/26/23, 4:56 PM
is this write by ChatGPT?

2/28/23, 12:56 PM
@[PassWord](/user/show/930016) Actually, I guess I was wrong. According to https://copyleaks.com/features/ai-content-detector the first several paragraphs of this story were ai generated. The site I used said 99.7% probability.

Martin
2/28/23, 5:21 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I've added the "ai created" tag to it. Thanks for checking and notifying us!