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2/28/23, 5:23 PM
Usually I never comment like this but this was a difficult, almost impossible read.
2/28/23, 3:34 AM
I hate to be the first one to comment. It very much needs more fleshing out. Why all of the sudden did they have lust in their eyes. Why did they fuck like that. Just there are so many holes and gaps to make the story. Not just hard to follow along with, but makes it just flat unenjoyable. “I’ve been keeping track on how many times you guys came. Kaito came 4 times, Kanoashi came 3 times. I came 7 times and the absolute slut is Austin who came 19 times in the past 3 hours” said Refias. I found that extremely jarring in an already jarring story. This isn't meant to tear down your art. I would like to see you improve on this same story expand, and grow.

Anonymous
2/28/23, 8:15 AM
@[HnT Boy](/user/show/87763) this is my first time writing a NSFW story so it would make sense that it sucks so bad. in the future, i might continuing or fixing this story

Martin
2/28/23, 5:22 PM
@Anonymous Don't get discouraged! You only get better with practice. And reading a lot of other stories. You might get inspired, too :)
Feb 25, 2023
2/26/23, 4:56 PM
is this write by ChatGPT?

2/28/23, 12:56 PM
@[PassWord](/user/show/930016) Actually, I guess I was wrong. According to https://copyleaks.com/features/ai-content-detector the first several paragraphs of this story were ai generated. The site I used said 99.7% probability.

Martin
2/28/23, 5:21 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I've added the "ai created" tag to it. Thanks for checking and notifying us!
2/28/23, 3:43 PM
This is so amazing I am just begging you to update it
2/28/23, 3:25 PM
So romantic and sweet, with a healthy respect for consent and communication, too. What a lovely story! :)
Jai Young
2/28/23, 2:49 PM
I listened to the hypno file and felt compelled rn share my email jaiyoung@protonmail.com. Do your worst 😈
1/15/23, 7:27 AM
Talley sure is a devilish leprechaun! A sexy, playful, but definitely dangerous firebrand. Methinks wreckage is not simply a sexual metaphor in there… 😃

2/28/23, 2:44 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Firebrand is such a good word for him, haha, I _definitely_ didn’t start using it in the next chapter I’m writing… yeah, he’s no one to fuck with, but it’s fun as hell when he fucks with you. Sexual wreckage is a “metaphor” (or a literal phrase) that’s going to come up more and more, I think. Guys this studly with dicks this big, leaving gaping holes and blissed-out bottoms? I think wreckage is a very good word for it.
2/28/23, 2:08 PM
Love the story
2/28/23, 1:30 PM
Ciao Yoshi! Ho appena fatto la rilettura di questo il tuo fantastico racconto. Spero che vada tutto bene e che torni a postare sul sito. Grazie di nuovo!
Roxas
2/28/23, 1:24 PM
Vivo para servir al virus