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7/11/25, 11:54 PM
Awww a happy ending. 😊 Also, what a great potential solution to the manosphere. Everyone leaves satisfied!

7/17/25, 9:40 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) I know, right? This is how we fix modern masculinity, imo
7/6/25, 9:50 PM
I have struggled with this recently, and concluded that I shouldn't keep trying to be the writer I clearly am not. I can come up with ideas, I can create setting, often in far too much detail than is needed, and I can create an outline to a plot. Fleshing said plot out to what is a something I feel is a worthwhile standard is currently a skill that eludes me; however, I will persist until I find a style that works for me, rather than give up on things because I feel they are so inferior to the output of those writers so skilled at putting you in the moment. I am working on the next part, I have breezed through a worldbuilding section and have stalled on an intimate scene. I will pause and reconsider my approach before continuing.

Faun
7/17/25, 9:06 PM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) I think that's a pretty common affliction. I would counsel you not to beat yourself up about it, or feel like you're not a good writer - your work clearly comes from a place of love _and_ passion. I hope the act of creation will continue you bring you joy - I certainly look forward to your future stories!
7/17/25, 8:07 PM
A very original idea!
7/17/25, 7:49 PM
i absolutely love the way you mix the physical aspects of sex with Jason's evolving mental state as he goes deeper into submission, obedience, service, and devotion. It's also hot the way Gareth seems so aware of Jason's mental state and what to do to deepen his control. (i suspect that you and i have the same powerful but unresolved need to find a forceful Master.) Great job! Great story! Thanks so much, BoyWhoWrites!
Anonymous
7/17/25, 4:25 PM
Can't wait for more
Anonymous
7/17/25, 4:25 PM
Lance is such a wedgie bottom. Will he show the other football players to like them?
7/17/25, 2:55 PM
Very interesting, I think Maybe a separate story. Interesting to see where it goes.
7/17/25, 8:41 AM
Oh man, a new episode of Mastermind!! My favorite. The backstory of our beloved supervillian was every bit as exciting as I hoped for. And to think that their lover betrayed them... what a twist! I also liked that we saw the first two recruits. However, leaving the story at such a cliffhanger, really diabolical. I can't wait for next episode. Will our charming hero prevail? Will he awaken his lover under the cold shell of Detective Ames? Or is it too late? I will stay tuned and wait eagerly
7/17/25, 7:46 AM
loved the story, well written, hope to see more of you :D i was a bit sad though that these 2 didn't end up together after their confession