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2/27/23, 3:11 AM
What a great start!!
2/27/23, 12:29 AM
Love it. The bit about saving the environment is as hilarious as it is a hot excuse for having him swallow all of Steve’s waste.

2/27/23, 1:36 AM
@[TakeAWhiff](/user/show/908452) Thanks! Yeah, Steve wasn't necessarily trying to be mean about it, but knowing how his power works (making men relaxed, compliant, suggestible) he *was* having some fun at Jimmy's expense. On the brightside, pretty much no matter what he says, Jimmy will always take it in the most positive light possible. :rofl:
2/27/23, 12:08 AM
Very nice! I love turn-about stories and stories where the bad guy wins, and this has both. Tom flips the tables on the mage, which is good, but the mage has already changed Tom, so it sort of felt like the bad guy won (because Tom doesn’t feel exactly like a good guy at the end). I loved Tom using the staff on himself at the end too. Very hot.

2/27/23, 12:48 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) That was a fun twist.
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2/27/23, 12:36 AM
As always your writing is amazing; the narrative structure is well formed and the characters feel like they have personality. I'm looking forward to hearing more about Marcus' plans now he has more of the sarcophagus bags...
2/26/23, 10:49 PM
is this a one-shot or there will be more parts?

2/26/23, 11:23 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Probably a one shot.

2/26/23, 11:25 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) okay, thanks for answering, I was asking as this one felt open ended

2/26/23, 11:36 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I guess I can see that.

2/26/23, 11:38 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) that is a good story, i enjoyed it

2/26/23, 11:43 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you did.
2/26/23, 11:22 PM
Keep it coming! This was so worth the wait, can't wait for the next chapter!!
2/26/23, 10:47 PM
A very fun and sexy read! Not a lot stories on here with this kind of scenario. Would love to know what the lich gets up to with all those naked adventurers the mimic gives him.
Jun 12, 2022
2/26/23, 10:05 PM
Mfhhh...... And then… it was over.
2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!