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Jun 12, 2022
2/26/23, 10:05 PM
Mfhhh...... And then… it was over.
2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!
2/26/23, 9:40 PM
Pretty much enjoyed this story from start to end, and I'm a sucker for secret society stuff. Very impressive that you wove a realistic seeming mind control process in just based on a guy with an overactive prostate. I loved it, and wish that is what actually happened in real life _so much_ ;-) but just excellent worldbuilding, and you write erotic scenes like few others.
2/26/23, 2:39 PM
This is going to be so good! Love the premise. Makes me want to go bike riding again; just in time for spring.

peachy
2/26/23, 9:36 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) thank you i’m glad to have inspired you ;)
2/26/23, 12:08 PM
Oh this was great. Hit all my notes. Picture was hot. Loved it! Hope we see more where his roommate falls under the power of his scent 🤤

2/26/23, 9:26 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Than you very much! I might cook up some ideas about a sequel... :smiling_imp:
2/26/23, 9:16 PM
I have had actual dreams of Archie and the cops scenario since I first read it. You have a great way of highlighting both the helplessness of his situation, how others take advantage of it, and how much he enjoys it despite himself -- just really solid writing. Thanks!
Gingcub
2/26/23, 6:18 PM
Can’t wait to see who the author is! Hope you have more stories.

2/26/23, 6:30 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) The suspense! I do have more stories on this site.

Gingcub
2/26/23, 7:52 PM
Huzzah! @The Author (name hidden due to challenge)
2/26/23, 7:16 PM
This was really classic, and I enjoyed it a ton!
2/26/23, 7:10 PM
I really enjoyed this! I’m looking forward to the next chapter so much! Especially, because of the impending foot fetish theme you’ve put in there. This story is making me crave more!
2/26/23, 3:40 PM
Miss your stories a lot!