Recent Comments

2/20/23, 7:39 PM
This really hit one of my kinks. My only question: is Brian still aware? Does he know what he has become? And if yes, does he enjoy his new reality? Okay, okay. Three questions. So hot.

peachy
2/25/23, 11:28 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I’m glad you liked it and Brian isn’t aware of it now that he’s been reduced to just a toy. Thanks again!

2/26/23, 2:10 PM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) Aw, shucks. Was hoping he’d have some awareness. Maybe not of what he used to be, but maybe he could be happy as a toy, and make friends with the other toys.
2/26/23, 10:25 AM
Great start, looking forwards to more......

peachy
2/26/23, 10:27 AM
@[Lycra lad](/user/show/10003596) thank you i hope you enjoy the future parts!
2/26/23, 2:06 AM
When I saw the end of the story arriving I got worried. :worried: But you're going to add more, so we're good.

peachy
2/26/23, 10:27 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) yeah don’t worry there will be more ;)
2/26/23, 1:39 AM
Excellent. Can’t wait.

peachy
2/26/23, 10:27 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) thank you so much!
mickey
2/26/23, 10:10 AM
Great story. I'm hoping for more
2/26/23, 3:22 AM
I feel like there's a possibility that two himbos might end up bisexual but as long as they've got gay energy it's all going to be okay in the end. 😌

2/26/23, 7:26 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) That's all that matters :grin:
2/26/23, 6:13 AM
People have probably figured this out by now, but I stalk the comments section and my preferred way of discovering older stories that I missed is when someone else does the hard work of finding them and comments. And if the comment makes me curious to read the story I do, and then typically comment on it. So thanks to @DikThik for reading this one and commenting, which led me to read it. What a great series. It avoided a lot of pitfalls of extreme BDSM fantasy stories. The imagination and perversity on display here is incredible. The (fantasy-style) hypnosis was handled very well, in a way that deepened the control and loss of self for the protagonist and allowed him to be transformed but in a way that felt truly _transformative_ and not destructive or ruinous. Parts of this story share a lot of common ground with typical ruination stories but the author refused to go down that path, instead exploring the physical and mental transformations to Martin/Slave in an intriguing and thoughtful way. Phil kept things grounded and almost kind of sane amidst the insanity. Of course he did things that no master in real life should ever do, but he never went down the unfeeling psychopath route that mind controller characters usually do in these sorts of stories. Like we would hope of real life BDSM masters, Phil actually had a plan, actually thought things through, and actually valued his property. That shouldn't be rare even in these kinds of stories, but it _patently_ is rare. It would have been incredibly easy to write Phil as a villain but the author never did and even brought Luke around towards the end as a bonus master. The ending had a tone of mirth that wasn't present in the earlier chapters but I found it welcome and a nice denouement. Incredibly well done story.
Jess
2/26/23, 4:07 AM
Intriguing and evocative, Light and dark. Well done
11/14/22, 12:20 PM
I love this story and I would definitely buy a physical book with it. *hint hint*

2/26/23, 3:16 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Sooooo if you go on Amazon. And give “Unleashed Desires” and my name a look up. I have published my first book. It’s an e book for now. And just a collection of some of my short stories. But. Pup training for Police is gonna be the first physical book I release once I get it set up correctly. Stay tuned.
Martin
2/11/23, 9:21 PM
Lovely little story. Are you going to write more about their new relationship?

2/26/23, 3:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Probably not. This was a one off gift for a friend.