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2/25/23, 8:00 PM
I like this series so much :+1:
2/25/23, 5:58 PM
Great as always! You never cease to amaze me. Next: big assed football coach alone with his handsome, hung star quarterback in the locker room. Daddy coach ends up as his young quarterback’s little slut as the pink fog hits.
Anonymous
2/25/23, 5:58 PM
so hot!
2/25/23, 5:08 PM
Will we see next part someday?
Feb 25, 2023
2/25/23, 4:52 PM
It's stories like this one that make their fictional nature so very frustrating
2/25/23, 1:18 PM
I’d been anxiously waiting for the next chapters. Love where this is going.
2/25/23, 12:27 PM
This is a great start. Chad and Ethan are enjoyable characters. The spellbook means this could go any direction, the plant doesn't even need to remain an important part of the story you could quite literally take this any direction you wish. One thing I will say, because I myself was reminded of this recently, is that you ought not to use tags on a chapter that aren't in that particular chapter. A story will inherit all tags used across the story. So for example, no one was droned in this chapter. Maybe that will happen in a future chapter, but not yet. So save that tag until it's relevant. Great job and look forward to seeing where this one goes after the contest.
Anonymous
2/25/23, 12:21 PM
hot!!!
2/25/23, 10:37 AM
I really enjoyed this story, so I added it to my favourites. It would be really nice, if you go deeper into the settings, there is so much potential to build a huge world about boys getting turned into drones throughout multiple themes. Also for this story to be a bit more detailed. What is the protagonist feeling seeing all turned into drones, what does the process feeling like, what really happened to his friend… did he maybe even surrendered willingly? So much room for so much greater stories to come, keep it going ;)
2/25/23, 9:36 AM
Amazing. Can’t wait for more