Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/25/23, 8:42 AM
Pretty hot, though I'd be lying if I said I wasn't hoping for some big locker room orgy(or perhaps out on the pitch?), even if this is more realistic. I do like that the romance theme is still present, will that continue in future chapters? And will we learn more about the drones?
Stu
2/24/19, 7:39 AM
This is my favorite of all your wonderful stories. Like others who have left comments, my only *complaint* is that it’s not long enough! For some reason, I find your seashells much more alluring than alien goo, etc. Plus, I’ve always loved the idea of a necklace controlling its wearer. For reference, other favorite authors of mine are Wrestlr, Eigh (where’d you go?!?), McGarguy and Absman420. And, honestly, I love it when a mind-controlled father (or stepfather) brings his sons into the fold. Doesn’t Alex have some college friends he’d like to invite to the beach during the remained of the time-share rental? Ditto Ryan and the dad? And please post that early story you mentioned that’s a riff on the Puppet Masters.

2/25/23, 7:28 AM
@Stu hmm which is hotter, a necklace controlling its wearer in a very parasitic way, or a necklace corrupting its wearer in a symbiotic way :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
2/25/23, 6:48 AM
I am very interested to know who Anette is and how a supposedly ordinary princess can have so much mental resistance. Was she also a Wizard? A Cleric? Or maybe a Paladin? Finally there's complications for our manipulative mage. Waiting new chapters, best wishes!
2/23/23, 11:58 AM
out of curiosty, is the name daybreaker connected to dawn/Dusk?

2/23/23, 1:34 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Good catch! Can't reveal too much but we shall see... :smiling_imp:

2/25/23, 6:36 AM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) extremely high quality, engaging choice of words, and a very enticing plot! aaaaaa
2/25/23, 6:06 AM
Wow, that was spectacular! Can’t wait to see where this goes next!
2/25/23, 5:48 AM
Maybe some police officers action?
2/25/23, 5:46 AM
A police station, an inmate with a big dick and two cops.
2/25/23, 5:41 AM
Thank you for the warning about future chapters! 🤗
2/25/23, 5:39 AM
Oh hell yes!!!! 😍😍😍
2/25/23, 5:26 AM
So excited when new chapters arrive. You always get me hard. Wish I could meet Mr. Chubbers!