Recent Comments

2/24/23, 11:28 AM
My goodness, there were a lot of pearl-clutching comments on this story, weren't there? Anyway, I loved the "IF GOD HATES GAYS, WHY ARE WE SO CUTE" sign :-)
2/24/23, 11:08 AM
Can't wait to see a programmer, slut, and worker drone in action. The prototypes sound hot, maybe something elite like a competitive bodybuilder or a strongman.
EntrancedGay92
2/24/23, 10:38 AM
Not a bad start. If you choose to continue writing, try and focus more on building up the tension/mood between your hypnotist and your subject. I find that makes the whole take down better and not rushed. Good choice with using a spiral, I love those. Finally, next time be sure you review the formatting before submitting because it's all one giant paragraph, which makes it hard to read.
2/24/23, 6:40 AM
I really enjoyed this and, like the others said, I laughed out loud a few times (eg at the mention of Lady Gaga). The ending felt a tad rushed but all in all, a terrific story!

2/24/23, 9:13 AM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it :grin: Definitely agree about the ending, it just sort of stops.
2/24/23, 6:07 AM
Amazing chapter. This one easily earns the 5 heart romance rating.
2/24/23, 4:45 AM
Definitely one of the best sex scenes I've read in any story. Well done. You are such a gifted writer!
2/24/23, 4:00 AM
The idea of a bound top really appeals to me, but I still loved where you went with it.
2/24/23, 3:38 AM
I must have this drug the cartel is working on ;-)