Recent Comments

Nutiper
4/1/23, 1:51 AM
Whew. One of my favorite parts of this chapter is the way you've taken a recently-popularized trend on the site—aka, self-lubricating butts—and done a spin on it that feels distinctive and somehow *intimate*. Like, *romantic* butt-lube... The fact that Carter describes it to himself as 'the lube my body had made *for* my buddy Brook'... Or the way Carter shivers and reacts to the feeling of cold air hitting his lubed hole, and seems viscerally affected by the sensations... Or the way its pheromone-laden scent 'bursts into the air like a spray of cologne' and causes Brook to be even *more* turned on and growly as he's making out with Carter... Butt-lube as eros. I love it. Let me put *that* on my next Valentine card... As other commenters have said, I'm really excited to read the remaining chapters when the contest is over! This story is fantastic, and incredibly fun.
Anonymous
4/1/23, 12:51 AM
Hot. I wonder how many guys here would have the same reaction as Max?
4/1/23, 12:06 AM
I’m really hope we don’t have to wait long for the conclusion. I love the series so far.
Anonymous
3/31/23, 11:19 PM
No hate, but I think I'm going to give up on this series. I appreciate your work but it's hard to stick around with zero updates.
Mar 30, 2023
3/31/23, 11:17 PM
The ending felt a tad bit rushed (notably, the kiss triger seems to come out of nowhere), but I really like when stories actually do a jock hypnotized into sort of nerd rather than the reverse. :smile: Really cool stuff!
Anon
3/31/23, 8:26 PM
I'm starting to realize your stories never have happy endings Which is hot

3/31/23, 10:06 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/910942) Really? I'm sure I've had plenty of 'happy endings'! Well,... maybe not 'happy' from the position of a healthy mind, but my protagonists tend to be a little too far gone to see their endings as anything BUT happy. :wink:
3/31/23, 9:11 PM
Wow, this hits all the right buttons! I can't stop reading it, over and over. I think I'm becoming brainwashed... And I LOVE it!!
3/31/23, 8:42 PM
Love this story! I keep checking back periodically to see if there’s a new chapter. Great job! I can’t wait for more.
3/31/23, 6:40 PM
What a fun story. Very interesting how Dom really didn’t realize his obsession with muscles, cocks, and men in general. And I love how he was to think to think it through. And how Dom eventually became a bottom. I wonder if he becomes a sub too? How will his team control play out? And what happens when head pheromone sniffer, Coach, gets dragged into all this!
3/30/23, 5:01 PM
So hot.....thanks Orientalism! There's nothing like the manipulation of men who come from such hyper-masculine societies where the only acceptable behavior is topping. I hope you continue with this story, or with new similar stories, especially if you have the seduced men maintain total awareness of their straightness, and not be able to control their bodies. How about "Hypnosis of the Imam" or "Hypnosis of the Muslim Father and His Newlywed Son" (gives me an instant hardon - totally taboo and subversive!) ... just some ideas.

3/31/23, 4:30 PM
@[daemon](/user/show/10011087) Many thanks. Yes I was very surprised and disappointed not to find more stories featuring Muslim men on GST. They have such a heightened masculinity that it's always very exciting to imagine submitting them. I plan to write more but my English is far from perfect, it spoils the reading a bit.

Anonymous
3/31/23, 6:31 PM
There is nothing wrong with your English, otherwise I would not love your story. It is perfect and very realistic. Please write a story about a totally straight Muslim dad and son. That would be great. And please, don't believe your English is not good!

3/31/23, 6:33 PM
This is the beginning of a fantastic series!