Recent Comments

2/23/23, 4:25 AM
That was.... absolutely adorable. And having a phenomenal escort give someone a free ride because the sex was so mind blowing? Let's consider that a wish well worth wishing for.
2/23/23, 3:49 AM
Would love to see this continued:)))
2/23/23, 3:39 AM
I wanna be a good puppy! :dog:
2/23/23, 3:10 AM
Seriously fantastic. You have a talent for dragging the seduction of _the reader themselves_ out, and that's so huge in erotica. Thank you!
2/23/23, 2:20 AM
Man, I love discovering these amazing older stories. This was ludicrously hot and incredibly wicked at the end.
Anonymous
2/23/23, 1:48 AM
What a magnificent story. You truly have a way with words.
2/23/23, 1:03 AM
thank you, Jack Parker!
2/23/23, 12:23 AM
Incredibly hot story! Thank You for adding this latest chapter. I've been an alpha all my life, but your story has me yearning to be a beta for a stud like Max :) I hope you write more soon. I'm a huge fan of twinky and femboy transformations. It would be amazing if you added to Lucas' humiliation by changing his grooming and clothing style to be an obvious twink or femboy. In case you're open to additional plot ideas, here are couple more. I'd love to see Max's little bro spend some time with Lucas as part of his training to be an alpha. I love the humiliation Lucas would feel as he's forced to submit to a kid several years younger than him. It would also be awesome to see the lil bro or another young alpha get in trouble and be forced to transition to a beta. Seeing him struggle with losing his alpha status/physique/attitude gradually over several weeks would be soo hot! Thanks again for sharing your work! -Taylor (becoming tayli for the right alpha?) :)
2/22/23, 9:41 AM
Great job with this instalment! I particularly liked the leather skin idea. It reminds me of a story on CYOC where a mischievous imp gives his thrall, who he’s cursed to be perpetually naked, a disguise by magically fashioning his skin into a cop uniform, complete from boots to hat. The imp’s thrall can feel everything through the uniform because it’s really just his skin. Hope there’s more to come in this series!

2/22/23, 9:59 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Yeah, we might see more of those two in the future in a chapter of their own, because I've always had a thing for skin-as-gear TF.

Anonymous
2/22/23, 11:36 PM
@[Wesley Bracken](/user/show/13596) Really digging the leatherman concept as well here! Particularly the fact that his boots are his actual feet, it's the perfect 2 for 1 deal! Would definitely love to see more of them.
2/22/23, 11:25 PM
This could be a great series! More details on description of mind altering/wiping process would be better? But I already into it.