Recent Comments

2/23/23, 12:23 AM
Incredibly hot story! Thank You for adding this latest chapter. I've been an alpha all my life, but your story has me yearning to be a beta for a stud like Max :) I hope you write more soon. I'm a huge fan of twinky and femboy transformations. It would be amazing if you added to Lucas' humiliation by changing his grooming and clothing style to be an obvious twink or femboy. In case you're open to additional plot ideas, here are couple more. I'd love to see Max's little bro spend some time with Lucas as part of his training to be an alpha. I love the humiliation Lucas would feel as he's forced to submit to a kid several years younger than him. It would also be awesome to see the lil bro or another young alpha get in trouble and be forced to transition to a beta. Seeing him struggle with losing his alpha status/physique/attitude gradually over several weeks would be soo hot! Thanks again for sharing your work! -Taylor (becoming tayli for the right alpha?) :)
2/22/23, 9:41 AM
Great job with this instalment! I particularly liked the leather skin idea. It reminds me of a story on CYOC where a mischievous imp gives his thrall, who he’s cursed to be perpetually naked, a disguise by magically fashioning his skin into a cop uniform, complete from boots to hat. The imp’s thrall can feel everything through the uniform because it’s really just his skin. Hope there’s more to come in this series!

2/22/23, 9:59 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Yeah, we might see more of those two in the future in a chapter of their own, because I've always had a thing for skin-as-gear TF.

Anonymous
2/22/23, 11:36 PM
@[Wesley Bracken](/user/show/13596) Really digging the leatherman concept as well here! Particularly the fact that his boots are his actual feet, it's the perfect 2 for 1 deal! Would definitely love to see more of them.
2/22/23, 11:25 PM
This could be a great series! More details on description of mind altering/wiping process would be better? But I already into it.
2/22/23, 10:59 PM
So happy that you came back to this. Just wondering — you’ve never really come back to the witch character from the beginning. Here, Lucas wondered if he was in heaven. Heaven or not, is he dead?? Did the witch lady send him to this afterlife to teach him a lesson? I also always wondered if Lucas’s body actually changed size. I’ve kind of always got off on the idea that he still has his bodybuilder physique, but if you’re 6 feet and can bench 360, that’s pretty beta in a world where everyone is 7’6” can bench 540 and where 14” cocks are average. No notes. Just always been curious! Love it when Max says dominating things like “You’re never gonna cum again” and passes it off as completely normal.
1/25/23, 3:46 PM
Loved it- especially the younger gardener topping his employer’s ass. Your main character is so delightfully sub!!! Can’t wait for more.

2/22/23, 9:03 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks!
2/22/23, 9:00 PM
loved this! I loved all the different flavors of control and transformation!
2/22/23, 8:44 PM
Insanely hot. I loved this series before and I am sooooooo happy you have come back to write more. Love this world you’ve created.
Bama boy Jason
2/22/23, 8:43 PM
Hot!!! Now, I wanna be a catboi. Unless you're gonna have Saytrs, then I wanna be a goatboi.
2/22/23, 7:33 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
2/22/23, 5:10 PM
**my dick was hard** until the marriage part.