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7/17/25, 1:19 AM
brilliant!

7/17/25, 9:50 PM
@[CEO Zaddy](/user/show/10064188) Thank you 🤩
7/15/25, 1:43 AM
This was outstanding! What a fun twist on the concept! I love the _broish-ness_ of Jonah and Toby and their degradation into becoming bottom sluts. Great work, can't wait to see who wrote this! By the way...uhh...would you know the link to this server? Asking for a friend... :eyes:

7/17/25, 9:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much!! Also, sorry, the server's private rn coz' too many people were joining to get a chance to pound Jonah and Toby's asses. Maybe next time!
7/11/25, 11:54 PM
Awww a happy ending. 😊 Also, what a great potential solution to the manosphere. Everyone leaves satisfied!

7/17/25, 9:40 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) I know, right? This is how we fix modern masculinity, imo
7/6/25, 9:50 PM
I have struggled with this recently, and concluded that I shouldn't keep trying to be the writer I clearly am not. I can come up with ideas, I can create setting, often in far too much detail than is needed, and I can create an outline to a plot. Fleshing said plot out to what is a something I feel is a worthwhile standard is currently a skill that eludes me; however, I will persist until I find a style that works for me, rather than give up on things because I feel they are so inferior to the output of those writers so skilled at putting you in the moment. I am working on the next part, I have breezed through a worldbuilding section and have stalled on an intimate scene. I will pause and reconsider my approach before continuing.

Faun
7/17/25, 9:06 PM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) I think that's a pretty common affliction. I would counsel you not to beat yourself up about it, or feel like you're not a good writer - your work clearly comes from a place of love _and_ passion. I hope the act of creation will continue you bring you joy - I certainly look forward to your future stories!
7/17/25, 8:07 PM
A very original idea!
7/17/25, 7:49 PM
i absolutely love the way you mix the physical aspects of sex with Jason's evolving mental state as he goes deeper into submission, obedience, service, and devotion. It's also hot the way Gareth seems so aware of Jason's mental state and what to do to deepen his control. (i suspect that you and i have the same powerful but unresolved need to find a forceful Master.) Great job! Great story! Thanks so much, BoyWhoWrites!
Anonymous
7/17/25, 4:25 PM
Can't wait for more
Anonymous
7/17/25, 4:25 PM
Lance is such a wedgie bottom. Will he show the other football players to like them?
7/17/25, 2:55 PM
Very interesting, I think Maybe a separate story. Interesting to see where it goes.