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1/27/23, 2:12 AM
Loved this story, and I'm a complete sucker for happy endings so that was great. Jake's sudden incontinence (including bowel incontinence) seems entirely too convenient and I kept waiting to find out whether it was Dave's food, since you made such a point that he was preparing the food, and even the coffee on that first time Jake tried to go back to work or if it was some hypnosis that Dave was doing at night (which would explain why he was sleeping so poorly and getting up later than usual). Then in the end this was never addressed, which I took to mean that Jake simply remained oblivious to the manipulation. It does lend a sinister undercurrent to the light and breezy ABDL romance but I don't mean to say that it detracted from the story - I loved this about the story. I still consider it a happy ending even though in my mind David did entrap Jake into being his little guy, rather than fall into it through a succession of unlikely coincidences, because David clearly has real feelings for Jake and Jake's feelings also seem very real, even if they were induced. This prevents the story from veering off close to one of those dark ones where an unscrupulous master collects toys but doesn't even seem to care about them (or worse, actually collects them *because* he despises them-those stories always make me shudder). Very well done and enjoyable story.

CDR
2/20/23, 2:45 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) There are some hints to imply it might be the latter or both. As david does mention a baby monitor, already had extensive information and connections to abdl stuff. And even says he's been "saving up all week".
2/20/23, 10:50 AM
Fuck that cat. I hope Tanner wins 🤤

2/20/23, 1:46 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) I never thought I’d say this but yes, fuck that cat. I want Peter and Blake corrupted and banging at the end
2/20/23, 10:51 AM
Also I found it interesting that we see another character that eventually couldn't potty train. I wonder if it foreshadowes something or just a random detail that I'm giving too much attention to.

2/20/23, 1:33 PM
@Reader Imagine how difficult it must be for a diaper fetishist to successfully get out of diapers when they're living in this town, being cared for by a daddy. Any hesitation, any indication that you miss being diapered and daddy will conclude that the boy just isn't ready for big boy undies. And that's to say nothing about having an actual accident while potty training! lol, I'm not saying the boys are deliberately set up to fail, but it's uphill.
2/20/23, 12:08 AM
Can't wait for more, loved it.

2/20/23, 12:36 PM
@Jonanator I'm so glad! Still figuring out where to take the story from here, and how to keep it a slow burn. Thanks for reading!
2/20/23, 12:09 PM
Poor Skippy his first enema punishment. I do hope he makes it the full 10 minutes.
2/20/23, 11:50 AM
This is one of the first erotic hypnosis stories I ever read, and it still ranks up there with the absolute best.
Golden rose
2/19/23, 2:51 AM
I hope you could write "My Stepdad's New Master" story on part 2. I wish to know more about that story.

2/20/23, 11:36 AM
@Golden rose While like that story too, I don’t think asking for it I another story is polite. You could ask in the proper story’s page. Just my two cents
2/20/23, 11:33 AM
Love the way, Seke is oblivious of any changes and how the wish of follow his new master’s command can get him to follow some rando’s orders; quite the great portrayal of a zonked dude. Keep this going!
Oct 10, 2022
2/20/23, 10:59 AM
Echoing the commenters above. Terrifying and erotic.
2/20/23, 9:13 AM
I'm glad Archie and Gray got back together.