Recent Comments

Golden rose
2/19/23, 2:51 AM
I hope you could write "My Stepdad's New Master" story on part 2. I wish to know more about that story.

2/20/23, 11:36 AM
@Golden rose While like that story too, I don’t think asking for it I another story is polite. You could ask in the proper story’s page. Just my two cents
2/20/23, 11:33 AM
Love the way, Seke is oblivious of any changes and how the wish of follow his new master’s command can get him to follow some rando’s orders; quite the great portrayal of a zonked dude. Keep this going!
Oct 10, 2022
2/20/23, 10:59 AM
Echoing the commenters above. Terrifying and erotic.
2/20/23, 9:13 AM
I'm glad Archie and Gray got back together.
Anonymous
2/20/23, 8:23 AM
I loved this as much as christine loves play rehearsal

2/20/23, 8:56 AM
@Anonymous Thanks so much! I'm glad a fan of the musical likes my version! Someone named Gerard might make an appearance next chapter.
2/20/23, 8:33 AM
one of my top fantasy's, being wrestled into submission then fucked. this one was amplified by four. the only thing that would made it better for me is if it was in the middle of a gym. I envy Archie for his condition. at this point of the story I'm sad that Archie wrecked his relationship with Gray. I look forward to see how things develop.
2/18/23, 5:12 AM
Omg this story is so addictive and well written. Want to read more and more of it 😍

2/18/23, 3:27 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Thank you working on the next chapter now

2/19/23, 10:34 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) You're the best!! Hope you are enjoying the writing and creative process as much as we love reading it ❤

2/20/23, 7:01 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) I do this one I did have an few issues as I felt the original fight felt to rushed and wanted to expand before the tension. Then the right just poured out of me and was longer then intended but I liked it. So I ended it early and decided the next part to make it's own chapter and do a deeper dive. Also working on other story content as well.
Feb 17, 2023
felix
2/20/23, 7:00 AM
I still can't really see the appeal of these AI stories. I feel like it would genuinely be way better to have you write the ideas and develop them with care, creativity, and precision. Like bearlyhorny said, it lacks the eroticism and soul that comes with human-produced writing. I don't think there's much to actually be proud of if you're not putting in the hard work. Sorry
2/20/23, 5:38 AM
I'm so happy to see his cage getting upgraded, his cock getting downgraded, and his attitude coming along so very nicely!! 😍
2/20/23, 1:15 AM
I almost didn't want to read the comments along with the story, because this was so good on its own merits that I was afraid what people were saying about it. I know you self-deprecatingly put down your own writing ability a few times, and in case that wasn't just being modest: you have an excellent writing style, great humor, and a sense of where to take the plot so it stays fresh. I may not have always been rock hard and leaking for every moment, but I was never incurious about where it was going. Just really excellent work. Somehow elevated the genie trope.