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2/19/23, 7:59 PM
Oh yes, the parental "we have discussed it", also known as "I have exclaimed a decision in the hearing range of my child and now it is settled". This was too accurate and close to real life. I also loved the short moment where Mike was a bit grumpy after his bowel movement. In a way it showed Mike and Colton's chemistry as much as the emotional scenes do and I think this is wonderful.

2/19/23, 8:03 PM
@Reader Heehee, thanks for picking up on that. Yeah, Mike is a daddy in the gay sense but he’s also kind of a dad, and becoming more of one. Which is good, because Colton needed a dad as much as he needed a daddy.
Matcanb8
2/19/23, 7:50 PM
Bro this was next level. 🥴
2/19/23, 7:23 PM
We're back from hiatus! Thanks for your patience.
2/19/23, 7:08 PM
I'm not sure I've read a more perfect sinister yet sexy mind control story ...ever.
nycboot
2/19/23, 6:34 PM
"...long time to be as comfortable" - is that a promise for more chapters? :grinning: Perhaps the story concludes when Colton decides he really loves Mike and is totally into ABDL. Unless Mike - like a typical parent - wants to ensure that Colton gets a boy of his own and needs to be trained how to take care of that boy. :satisfied:

2/19/23, 6:45 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) My intention is to bring the story to a close before (or around) the 80k word mark, which would make it novel-length for a fiction story. Anything beyond that would be terribly self-indulgent, which is something I've already considered myself guilty of here. George R. Martin I am not - this is not going to be a saga. :rofl:
nycboot
2/19/23, 5:51 PM
ha - I was just re-reading this story shortly before the anonymous comment wondered if there were more chapters. Must be something in the air. :) Swizz, your induction sessions are incomparable!

Swizz
2/19/23, 6:32 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thanks!!
Anonymous
2/19/23, 5:06 PM
More chapters?

Swizz
2/19/23, 6:32 PM
@Anonymous this story is finished and there won't be any more chapters :-)
Feb 11, 2023
2/19/23, 6:09 PM
Super hot buildup, and the muscle worship when he finally gets Jack's shirt off was so so hot. If you do a sequel, I'd love to see more of the beats in the sex scenes (e.g. the blowjobs, the anal) get the same rich sensory descriptions as that muscle worship, you really paint a sexy picture when you take your time!
Anonymous
2/19/23, 2:31 PM
Hot as hell man, looking forward to more! And why stop at just the football team? The more dumb muscle sla--I mean disciples the better, I always say :smiling_imp:

2/19/23, 4:29 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I like the way you think!
2/19/23, 10:13 AM
I really enjoyed reading the story. Hope to see where it goes

2/19/23, 4:28 PM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) Thank you!