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4/28/25, 10:18 PM
Oh wow, that was hot
4/28/25, 6:48 AM
Super hot!

4/28/25, 5:00 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks, Loxley. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
4/27/25, 3:11 PM
Story so hot! ๐Ÿฅต 1000/10s

4/28/25, 1:46 PM
@[UWUMaster](/user/show/935658) Thank you, too kind.
4/27/25, 1:47 PM
This is FANTASTIC! You are amazing ... this storytelling is just so compelling and addictive!

4/28/25, 1:45 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks, Iโ€™m really glad you enjoyed the story!
4/27/25, 1:40 PM
I love this story

4/28/25, 1:43 PM
@Jonanator Thank you.
4/27/25, 12:21 PM
Curious, what chapter do you plan for this story? because damn the edge I felt for this one was immense, I hope we see the payoff soon and it's not abandon before we saw the final conclusion. Hope this update ASAP.

4/28/25, 1:43 PM
@[JRZTT](/user/show/14915) Youโ€™re going to see the payoff very soon I think. ๐Ÿ˜‰
4/27/25, 10:49 AM
Good lord this is sensational. Already a favourite.

4/28/25, 1:38 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Very much appreciated.
4/27/25, 10:05 AM
Holy Fuck! The story just gets better and better. Keep on going dude!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜โค๏ธ

4/28/25, 1:38 PM
@[BrzNLA](/user/show/10005227) Thanks, I will!
Zander
4/28/25, 11:45 AM
Great sequel, even better chapters went by. I liked everything, including the theme of forced submission and brainwashing, as well as the length of the chapter, which made the story more eventful. I liked meeting new characters (officers). I hope Darius will also send some to the Architect for brainwashing and service) I hope there will be chapters from the perspective of other characters too (for example, from Jamal Reed, who suspects Darius Kane of working for the Syndicate and secretly follows him after Torres disappears and returns a few months later, just like Kane. I think it would be interesting to see from the outside how a new hero character, after a year of Kane and Torres serving the Syndicate, will understand that they were hypnotized and will act smartly by communicating this information only to those he trusts in order to lure Kane and Torres for reprogramming (although this will most likely require Syndicate technology and its training methods). Then one of the officers will have to take on the role of the Master for a while.) I also hope there will be eroticism and a lot of sex scenes in the story) to make it even more perfect. ๐Ÿ˜ Maybe the next chapter will be similar?

4/28/25, 1:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for your comment.. everything you suggested was on my plan. However, I decided to give it a slow burn as it turned me on when a superhero. Also, generating those ai created photos took longer than I expected. The next chapter will definitely be more erotic :)

Zander
4/28/25, 1:31 PM
@[brainwashedman](/user/show/10005650) Thank you very much) we are waiting with impatience
Ericvw
1/14/23, 7:52 AM
So addictive. I love coming back. Please do another!!!!

2/18/24, 12:20 AM
@Ericvw I'm glad you like it! I have a lovely idea brewing for another story.

4/28/25, 12:49 PM
@[drewfy](/user/show/10021368) Iโ€™ve read this story so many times thank you!