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Feb 11, 2023
2/19/23, 6:09 PM
Super hot buildup, and the muscle worship when he finally gets Jack's shirt off was so so hot. If you do a sequel, I'd love to see more of the beats in the sex scenes (e.g. the blowjobs, the anal) get the same rich sensory descriptions as that muscle worship, you really paint a sexy picture when you take your time!
Anonymous
2/19/23, 2:31 PM
Hot as hell man, looking forward to more! And why stop at just the football team? The more dumb muscle sla--I mean disciples the better, I always say :smiling_imp:

2/19/23, 4:29 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I like the way you think!
2/19/23, 10:13 AM
I really enjoyed reading the story. Hope to see where it goes

2/19/23, 4:28 PM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) Thank you!
nycboot
2/19/23, 3:28 PM
Gads, I must be getting way too wrapped up in this story. Of course the sex scene in the shower was hot. But 10 times hotter was the initial scene where Colton breaks down. Oh, that really got to me! By now my attitude to the characters has almost reversed: Initially I was identifying with Colton and Mike seemed the "problematic" one. Now I'm totally in love with Mike and Colton seems like the uptight one. I find it hard to believe you've written so many chapters. The narrative flows so easily, I never have to think of "more words until we get to the next exciting part." Really @amul, this is an amazing story! Thank you for creating this world!

2/19/23, 4:15 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thanks for the kind words. As far as Colton being uptight goes (lol). Remember that when the story started he was a kinky virgin who had watched far too much pornography while living a closeted lifestyle. He's now confronting sexual reality and I think it's natural that he's coming to realize he wasn't quite as sexually adventurous as his porn habits might have led him to assume. The transition from being closeted and sexually frustrated to living an openly kinky lifestyle is also a rude awakening for him. It's going to take him a long time to be as comfortable with things as some of the other residents.
11/13/22, 6:11 PM
I like where this is going! Neat exposition, great sex scene with the being inside the gauntlets, and—well, I _usually_ get squeamish over any kind of mind control or compulsion, but I like this idea of "bringing out what they deeply want". It's very wholesome. Looking forward to more!

11/13/22, 7:18 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I wouldn't be on here if I didn't enjoy _some_ amount of mind control or compulsion, but I usually prefer a character with some agency in it. I've already got a lot more cooking that's steamier than this!

2/19/23, 11:02 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Why member here if such visceral response?

2/19/23, 3:25 PM
@[Darmani](/user/show/138470) Oh, haha, funny enough, I came here/started writing for GayCupidStories because the interface and website were just that good! I’m mostly a Cupid writer with some slight Spiral influences, and when I see a Cupid story I usually read it. Anyway, we all go places on the internet where we differ from others in some major kinks, so I don’t really mind; I’m just careful with what I pick to read.
Anonymous
2/19/23, 2:12 PM
Such a hot chapter!
Anonymous
2/19/23, 1:49 PM
Love this series of transformations!
2/18/23, 3:10 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more

2/19/23, 1:37 PM
@Jonanator Awesome! Hope you enjoy the future chapters too!

Jonanator
2/19/23, 1:42 PM
@[Jack Milligan](/user/show/912927) I will. I like stories that have romance in it. Especially around this time. Tomorrow is my Birthday and I also make a year with my partner as well. Great stories to read. Look forward to read more.
2/19/23, 4:10 AM
Really great start and can't wait to see where it goes from here. Love the casually growing exhibitionism on the part of Dallas and Greg, the acceptance of wearing skimpy speedos and replacing all of their underwear with sluttier versions. Nice work. Looking forward to seeing more of then in their pink jocks and collars.

2/19/23, 1:37 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) Thanks! Hoping it is a satisfying story all around!
2/19/23, 4:42 AM
Great first chapter. And can I assume Greg’s last ‘dream’ wasn’t really a dream?

2/19/23, 1:37 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) You assume correct!